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THE INDIAN GIVER

There was a fella I knew who worked with hammer and chisel Made carvings in wood that could make your eyes sizzle. One day he brought a carving to the store Where they sell tobacco, cigarettes, cigars, and more... And there it stands beckoning, even in a drizzle.

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010




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Date: 12/27/2010 5:16:00 PM
Congratulations on your win in P.D.'s Indian Giver contest Dan C. Love, Carol
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Date: 12/27/2010 6:49:00 AM
Daniel, many congratulations on your fine win in PD's contest. Have a wonderful 2011 >> James....:)
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Date: 12/27/2010 5:55:00 AM
Hi. Congratulations on your deserved honour. Eamon
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Date: 12/26/2010 11:55:00 PM
Brings to mind those statues I've seen standing in such places like the stores I saw in NEbraska or Arizona. Congrats on your win, DAniel. LUv, Andrea
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:12:00 PM
Congrats Dan on your big win in PD's contest with this awesome entry my friend .. enjoy with luv and Happy New Year too...
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Date: 12/26/2010 8:46:00 AM
Navajo in the Pacific! I believe they were Daniel, altho beneficial in the over all war effort. I haven't been over to see where you placed in this contest, tho "Congratulations" I am sure are in order, with this worthy Limerick. Agape, Moses
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Date: 12/26/2010 8:04:00 AM
Congrats to you on your well deserved win..
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Date: 12/26/2010 7:35:00 AM
daniel, laughing out loud! CHHERS for bagging an award in PD’s contest... nette
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:43:00 AM
Congratulations on your win..Sara
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Date: 12/26/2010 5:31:00 AM
Congratulations on this well deserved win in the contest of PD. Dan iel
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Date: 12/25/2010 11:18:00 PM
DANIEL, CONGRATULATIONS I had so much fun reading every entry. Some where serious and awesome, hope you are enjoying your holidays,..p.d.
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Date: 12/20/2010 7:22:00 PM
Hey, cool way to do the Indian Giver contest, Daniel. Good luck with this one too!
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Date: 12/6/2010 10:30:00 PM
I see you really like doing limericks.I wish you well in the contest. This one puts me in mind of those Indian stores we used to go past when we took family vacations long ago!
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Date: 12/6/2010 7:55:00 AM
Nice humorous write on the India Giver, Daniel
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Date: 12/5/2010 10:04:00 PM
thanks for supporting my contest,..p.d.
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Date: 12/5/2010 9:27:00 PM
lol, I love it Daniel! Good luck in the contest*luv~SKAT
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