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The Forest King

Once upon a time In a small patch of forest A raven viewed his realm While he puffed out his chest "I'm the king of this forest" He said with a smirk But the robin, unimpressed Just called him a jerk But as the raven continued to talk An alarm spread through the trees They'd spotted a hawk! And all the creatures had to flee But the raven did not flee and was perched there still when talons pierced his skin As the hawk made the kill In that small patch of forest The news quickly spread The hawk was now king And the raven was dead

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 1/30/2017 7:50:00 AM
- Hooray for the King of the forest - Vivid and great written, Joseph - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 1/29/2017 7:49:00 PM
Oh how the mighty have fallen!! (with their chest puffed out in pride!)
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Date: 1/29/2017 11:23:00 AM
until the eagle comes along and etc etc, love the message here.
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Date: 1/29/2017 10:48:00 AM
not a very wise raven was he - great poem Jospeh:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs jan xx
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