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the e-fects of deciduous

Deciduous defines days of our lives by temporary scenes upon its stage. There we progress from infancy to age, so often judged by wealth our death survives. Deciduous events tempt youthful eyes, producing all that energetic rage. Each generation writing its new page, changing values deemed societal strives. Inconstant is the work of nature’s hand, casting shadows on deciduous moons. By nightly shifting, rhythm of the tides, its waxing, wanning angles will command, some human heart give yield to passions’ swoons. Ephemeral emotions brief, felt prides. 8/30/2024

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Date: 9/16/2024 11:25:00 AM
Dear Janis, your pensive sonnet is a wonderful take on the contest theme. Congratulations for your success in Craig's contest. Warmest wishes.. ~Susan
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/20/2024 5:07:00 AM
Thanks Susan. I appreciate your valued comments. Blessings of favor. Janis
Date: 9/16/2024 1:17:00 AM
Wonderful, congratulations
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/16/2024 5:00:00 AM
Much appreciation to you. Janis
Date: 9/5/2024 6:57:00 AM
Great iambic, Janis, super flow of thoughts. MY how society has striven in the past few years to sprout such a multiplicity of gender splits from simple male and female. A good twist of thought to the moon in your sestet.
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Janis Medders Tobechi
Date: 9/11/2024 10:02:00 AM
Thank you very much for your deep and thoughtful comments. Blessings of favor to you. Janis

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