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You form the breadth And depth of me, my love, As the sable night In twilight's finest silk. Lavender lilacs poise In simplicity And Fresh's joys; Nature generously renders. Its redolence wanders On a small simple table Set for two; Quiet and peaceable. Struggling dreams reach, Eager climax cries. Apace, A waft murmur hum, Lilacs scent lingers Delicious romantic sighs; Come smothering ardent rhythm Through the warm hidden Night it surrenders. My love, You form the breadth And depth of me, As the sable night In twilight's finest silk. 3/19/2020 Gif 1

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Date: 1/29/2021 8:01:00 AM
Charming poem, Eve ~
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Date: 4/1/2020 5:32:00 PM
Excellent write, Eve. "As the sable night In twilight's finest silk" captured my interest right from the beginning and your poem drew me in with its silky and sinuous flow. Congratulations on your #1 placement today! May your days be filled with the wafting scent of lilacs ~ John
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Date: 4/1/2020 4:08:00 PM
Wondrous and insightful, Eve, exquisite movement and tunefully versed, worthy for 1st place, my grateful thanks for your participation, Aloha William
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Date: 3/22/2020 7:58:00 AM
Back to say congratulations my friend!
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Date: 3/20/2020 8:06:00 PM
Eve, congratulations on the top placement. A beautiful poem and picture.
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Date: 3/20/2020 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. A beautiful poem and picture. Enjoy your day and win........
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Date: 3/20/2020 12:08:00 AM
What a lovely picture you paint with your imagery - so soft like "sable." Congratulations on your top placement Eve.
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Date: 3/19/2020 8:49:00 PM
A gorgeous romantic write my friend.
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Date: 3/19/2020 7:17:00 AM
This is really beautiful Eve--enjoyed its heartfelt verses and loving tone--this should win at the TOP.
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Date: 3/19/2020 6:26:00 AM
Well penned dear friend. Romantic lines are well fabricated. Over all it is a good poetry. Got pleasure to read it...........hugs//Manmath//
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