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SUN AM I

My Creator-endowed rays of celestial magnitude Emit solar power, enabling Earth’s existence-plenitude Fulfilling my commitment to rise daily with glowing altitude… Vibrantly warming mankind toward enthusiastic attitude I brighten the firmament while my beams awaken the multitude Toward zealous praises for a new day along triumphant zest of gratitude… Blowing my photosynthetic aptitude I pursue oxygen production midst energy source amplitude To replenish food supply, securing nourishment against crisis vicissitude… I delight in everyone’s disposition by my sunny beatitude While reaching-out those in solitude to bask in my jubilant quietude Rejoicing for doing best as the “greater light to rule the day”* with certitude.
*Genesis 1:16 16 And God made two great lights; the greater light to rule the day, and the lesser light to rule the night: he made the stars also. March 25, 2024 3rd place, "Wind, Rain, Snow, Thunder or Sun in 8-12 Lines" Poetry Writing Contest; Sponsored by Tania Kitchin; judged on 4/5/2024

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Date: 4/5/2024 4:52:00 PM
Beata, wonderfully penned, congratulations on your winning placement.
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Date: 3/25/2024 8:24:00 AM
I liked how you compared sun to God in a most subtle but beautiful way. A unique personification, but I liked it. enjoy your day, Sara Best wishes with the contest.
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