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: Summer Ending

Softly summer steals away while we sleep and slowly autumn creeps under doors like morning. While at noon we can be fooled, the evening cool confirms that summer cannot last.

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Deneen White

Date: 10/12/2008 9:22:00 AM

all good things must come to an end, I like the use of imagery this write evokes, take care D-nyce

Elaine George

Date: 10/6/2008 2:14:00 PM

This evokes very soft memories of summer ending . Siply beautiful. Lainie

Michael Torres

Date: 10/4/2008 6:21:00 AM

Maggie nicely written. A good reminder to head south. Enjoyed reading your fine work. Blessings Michael

Sharon Winter

Date: 9/25/2008 4:31:00 PM

It does kind of slowly but surely sneak up on us. A gentle, lovely end of summer write. Love, shar

Michael Degenhardt

Date: 9/24/2008 11:16:00 AM

Now this is one fantastic write! I love the flow, the change depicted in your words. Clear and beautiful is this read. Michael

Carrie Richards

Date: 9/19/2008 12:44:00 PM

You have just described exactly what it's like here today, where I live in California! Perfect poem for a September day!~Carrie