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darkness descends on mountains, fireflies glitter, glow illuminating starless night, sparkling diamonds on mother earth's tiara March 10, 2022 "Fireflies - Tanka" Poetry Contest Sponsor: JCB Brul FIRST PLACE Brian Strand 1093 Poetry contest FIRST PLACE

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Date: 3/28/2022 5:23:00 AM
Congrats on your winning work. Way to go. Got to love those fireflies. I enjoyed reading your work. Thanks for your visit to my page. Sara
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Date: 3/17/2022 10:22:00 PM
what an awesome final line that was, Mala. Big congrats in the contest
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Date: 3/17/2022 9:32:00 AM
Congratulations on this win. A beautiful write/picture. Nature does play the best at night like diamonds in the sky. Today, be blessed with your win.............
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Date: 3/17/2022 4:48:00 AM
"sparkling diamond" - Beautifully written. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/16/2022 10:30:00 AM
Oh Mala, this is utterly charming - "mother earth's tiara" indeed. What a unique and creative image. Congratulations and high fives for your win. Well deserved. Sending you blessings and hugs dear friend! This was a fun contest.
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Date: 3/16/2022 8:43:00 AM
Oh, how lovely. Especially "diamonds on mother earth's tiara. Congratulations!
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Date: 3/11/2022 8:12:00 AM
"Sparkling gems on Mother Earth's tiara'! Lovely indeed !Wish you all the Best in the contest , dear Mala!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/11/2022 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Valsa.
Date: 3/10/2022 11:58:00 AM
Sparkling diamonds on mother earth’s tiara…good one!
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/11/2022 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Kim
Date: 3/10/2022 11:06:00 AM
Love it! God bless you. Love, Gina
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 3/11/2022 9:09:00 AM
Thanks, Gina.