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Spring Monoku

Hearing mother bird singing to her little birds chirping fills my heart with joy.

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Malabika Ray Choudhury

Date: 5/31/2025 9:58:00 AM

Congratulations, Paula, on your win. I share the same sentiment with you - first thing in the morning, from my bed I listen to birds. Spring brings so much joy!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/31/2025 10:29:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. When I hear the birds singing, then I know spring is here. I love springtime. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Howard Kerr

Date: 5/29/2025 11:08:00 AM

Impeccable Paula. Congratulations on your success with this insightful, beguiling piece on how a different species interacts with its offspring. Thank you so much for your kind reflections on my entry. Much valued and very much appreciated Howard

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/29/2025 12:10:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I enjoyed writing this one. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/27/2025 12:23:00 PM

"2 Place" Spring Monoku ~ Date Written:5/10/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet......

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/26/2025 12:29:00 PM

Congrats!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:34:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Line Gauthier

Date: 5/26/2025 10:09:00 AM

Sweet, Paula ~

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:33:00 PM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, Sweet. I enjoy hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Valsa George

Date: 5/26/2025 6:32:00 AM

It is so pleasant to hear the mother bird singing to her little birdies. Congratulations, dear Paula. Hugs!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:32:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love spring and hearing the birds sing. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/26/2025 2:31:00 AM

- The beauty of spring, thank you for this beautiful picture, Paula :) - Congratulations on your win in the contest -:) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:30:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Also thanks for coming back to read again. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. Each year, the birds tell us spring is in the air. Hugs... May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/25/2025 9:48:00 PM

So sweet. Congrats in the contest

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:28:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, So sweet. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/25/2025 9:02:00 PM

Congrats on your placement in the contest Paula

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:27:00 PM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Congratulations. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 5/23/2025 2:19:00 AM

How beautiful this monoku is.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/27/2025 12:26:00 PM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. God's little singers and never off key. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Oliver Mckeithan

Date: 5/14/2025 2:16:00 PM

Mine too. New life springs forth

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/15/2025 10:52:00 AM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. Birds singing and little birds chirping say spring is here. Hooray!!! May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Gershon Wolf

Date: 5/13/2025 7:02:00 PM

Sweet chirping - a charming piece of Spring.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/14/2025 11:06:00 AM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, a charming piece of Spring. Many birds are now showing up. Hooray!!! I love hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Crystol Woods

Date: 5/12/2025 12:32:00 PM

One of my favorite things during spring as well! Good write! Xo

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/13/2025 1:47:00 PM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be a, Good write. I enjoy hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 5/12/2025 12:06:00 PM

It really is so joyful

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/13/2025 1:45:00 PM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I loved bringing this one to life. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Hilda Greenhough

Date: 5/12/2025 7:26:00 AM

I like your bird poem. I relate to these chirpers.

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/12/2025 9:15:00 AM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. They will make my day a good day. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

CayCay Jennings

Date: 5/11/2025 12:51:00 PM

That's why God created such beautiful bird sounds and wonderous bird observations - to remind us to be joyful, all is not only in divine order, but also beautiful if we use our senses minus brain activity to 'feel'. I concur with your monoku! CayCay

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/12/2025 9:13:00 AM

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 5/11/2025 10:34:00 AM

- Wonderful to listen to, Paula :) - Good luck in the contest :) - hugs

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/12/2025 9:11:00 AM

Thank You for reading, writing and for your Good luck in the contest.. Glad you enjoyed my fun "Spring Monoku" write. I love hearing the birds sing. Hugs... May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Phyllis Babcock

Date: 5/11/2025 10:17:00 AM

A wonderful sight to see mom bird taking care of her babies. Nice monoku for spring. love phyl

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/12/2025 9:10:00 AM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be a, Nice monoku for spring. I enjoy hearing the birds sing as I go writing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Kim Rodrigues

Date: 5/10/2025 8:36:00 PM

Beautiful monoku, just in time for Mother’s Day! Nice one, Paula!

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/12/2025 9:08:00 AM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be a, Beautiful monoku. I enjoyed writing about these birds singing away. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Deb M

Date: 5/10/2025 2:33:00 PM

How very lovely Paula…fills my heart also! Debx

Paula Goldsmith
Date: 5/10/2025 2:48:00 PM

Thank You for reading and writing. Glad you found my fun "Spring Monoku" to be, very lovely. I love hearing the birds sing. May you be blessed with joy as you hear the birds sing.........

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 5/10/2025 1:11:00 PM

Spring Monoku ~ Date Written:5/10/2025 ~ Written By Human Poet......