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Soul On Fire As the Music Keeps On Playing

The mere romantic breath and look that can swallow one whole, left unbroken as music plays, of unforgotten sounds. Heart beats, with each passion beat, dreams become reality, gentle and slow, keeping the world from fading, nor no bounds. 8/6/2018 Poetry Contest; A four line poem on what is love Sponsored by: Faraz Ajmal 14 syllables each line 4 lines, no more no less and each line must not exceed 14 syllables, howmanysyllables.com,

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Date: 8/11/2018 5:33:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. :)
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Date: 8/9/2018 8:37:00 PM
Sincere congratulations on your win in Faraz's contest, Eve - blessings and best wishes ... keep up the great work, my friend! :-) <3
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Date: 8/9/2018 6:20:00 PM
Beautiful poetic insights on what love is, Eve. Congratulations on your First Place win. Hugs, Sandra
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Date: 8/9/2018 10:51:00 AM
Congrats on your win Eve
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Date: 8/9/2018 3:23:00 AM
Congratulations on you win. I love this. Kai
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Date: 8/9/2018 3:15:00 AM
Congratulations, Eve on your win with a lovely write.
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Date: 8/9/2018 2:54:00 AM
Congratulations Eve! Music and love - always connected :)
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Date: 8/8/2018 8:51:00 PM
Eve, Congrats on your win in the contest! "Love it." Best wishes, Gershon
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Date: 8/8/2018 2:21:00 PM
Eve, wonderfully said!
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Date: 8/8/2018 1:47:00 PM
Your first line really expresses that magical feeling so beautifully Eve. I love your entry and congratulate you on your top win! : )
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Date: 8/8/2018 12:18:00 PM
This is a really lovely 4 line poem you have written on love, I absolutely love reading it, many congratulations on your top win in my contest, good luck and have a really nice day
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Date: 8/7/2018 2:37:00 PM
I believe that this one has hit the proverbial, "nail on the head"; as they say. A very well done piece.
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Date: 8/7/2018 10:53:00 AM
Well written verse Eve, you said a lot in four lines. Good luck. Tom
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Date: 8/7/2018 4:28:00 AM
I love this, Eve!
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