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Shimmer

icy pellets coat trees shimmer in frosted crust ~ nature's diamond boughs

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Sara Kendrick

Date: 1/25/2023 12:14:00 PM

Nature's diamonds..I like that. Some very cold diamonds. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate the honor of being there. Sara

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/25/2023 5:00:00 PM

Sara, thank you!

Paul Callus

Date: 1/25/2023 7:14:00 AM

Three lines of shimmering imagery, Tania. Adding another 2 lines with a twist could turn this into a very good Tanka. ~ Regards // paul

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/25/2023 5:00:00 PM

Paul, thank you!

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 1/25/2023 3:26:00 AM

- A beautiful winter picture, Tania :) - hugs

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/25/2023 4:00:00 AM

Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs!

Panagiota Romios

Date: 1/23/2023 12:27:00 AM

You bring back my days in the Midwest With this awesome Haiku Hugs, Pangie

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/23/2023 3:45:00 AM

Pangie, thank you!

Mike Gentile

Date: 1/21/2023 7:07:00 AM

Tania,The summation of your seasonal haiku is just perfect! It sparkles!! Happy Saturday xxoo

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/21/2023 9:13:00 AM

Mike, thank you! Hope your weekend is going well!

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 1/20/2023 5:50:00 PM

a real GEM!!!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/21/2023 4:14:00 AM

Andrea, thank you!

M. L. Kiser

Date: 1/20/2023 1:06:00 PM

This is a beautiful display for a Haiku; very nicely done!!!

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/21/2023 4:14:00 AM

ML, thank you!

Jenna Logan

Date: 1/17/2023 9:15:00 AM

I can envision them sparkling. Nice Haiku, Tania.

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/17/2023 6:26:00 PM

Jenna, thank you!

Victor Buhagiar

Date: 1/17/2023 2:05:00 AM

Loved your imagery. Victor

Tania Kitchin
Date: 1/17/2023 4:18:00 AM

Victor, thank you!