Shimmer

icy pellets coat
trees shimmer in frosted crust ~
nature's diamond boughs
Copyright © | Year Posted 2023

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Kendrick Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 12:14 PM
Nature's diamonds..I like that. Some very cold diamonds. Thanks for sharing and for dropping by my page to let me know I placed in your contest. I appreciate the honor of being there. Sara
Kitchin Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:00 PM
Sara, thank you!
Callus Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 7:14 AM
Three lines of shimmering imagery, Tania. Adding another 2 lines with a twist could turn this into a very good Tanka. ~ Regards // paul
Kitchin Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 5:00 PM
Paul, thank you!
Andresen Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 3:26 AM
- A beautiful winter picture, Tania :) - hugs
Kitchin Avatar
January 25, 2023 at 4:00 AM
Anne-Lise, thank you, hugs!
Romios Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 12:27 AM
You bring back my days in the Midwest With this awesome Haiku Hugs, Pangie
Kitchin Avatar
January 23, 2023 at 3:45 AM
Pangie, thank you!
Gentile Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 7:07 AM
Tania,The summation of your seasonal haiku is just perfect! It sparkles!! Happy Saturday xxoo
Kitchin Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 9:13 AM
Mike, thank you! Hope your weekend is going well!
Dietrich Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 5:50 PM
a real GEM!!!
Kitchin Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 4:14 AM
Andrea, thank you!
Kiser Avatar
January 20, 2023 at 1:06 PM
This is a beautiful display for a Haiku; very nicely done!!!
Kitchin Avatar
January 21, 2023 at 4:14 AM
ML, thank you!
Logan Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 9:15 AM
I can envision them sparkling. Nice Haiku, Tania.
Kitchin Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 6:26 PM
Jenna, thank you!
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January 17, 2023 at 2:05 AM
Loved your imagery. Victor
Kitchin Avatar
January 17, 2023 at 4:18 AM
Victor, thank you!
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