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She Walks

She walks in the boutique wearing Jimmy choos Red heels clicking, diamonds sparkle on her fingers Classy and elegant as pearls adorn her ears She walks along towards the back unsteady Dropping to the ground, her shoes go missing

Copyright © | Year Posted 2018




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Date: 6/11/2018 12:34:00 PM
Catchy... Mick
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/11/2018 6:15:00 PM
thank you
Date: 6/10/2018 4:26:00 PM
Tania, I really enjoyed your poem especially the ending. Haley
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2018 4:29:00 PM
thank you!
Date: 6/10/2018 1:42:00 PM
Tania, perhaps being a classic woman does not save you from circumstances.
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Tania Kitchin
Date: 6/10/2018 2:10:00 PM
thank you, I wrote it for a contest and had some fun with it.

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