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I Form - Imagism Form Contest
Sponsored by Constance La France written 9/26/2024
 

 

"Vision newly sprung with it’s calm, and tranquil weave of seductive fragrance and sound, flirting with heart and mind." Quote by poet Timely appearance golden sunshine Filtering flawless infuse of brine. Cool, caressing breath awaken dawn Piddle round ebbing waves, spring sun's yawn. Upward flight gulls dance in eager crowds Handouts underneath thin wispy clouds. Turquoise offshore breakdown short proem Wind's odyssey bends and churns sea foam. Breadth and depth water life beneath brief Womb ever pregnant and coral reef.

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Date: 10/23/2024 12:58:00 PM
loved sun's yawn, and the last line was brilliant. Belated Congrats for the win.
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Date: 10/8/2024 9:06:00 AM
Congratulations on your wonderful win. Enjoy your day/win............
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Date: 10/1/2024 6:45:00 AM
Eve, congratulations on your win in my Imagism contest, wonderfully penned, love the quote, Constance
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Date: 9/26/2024 7:43:00 PM
Such a reverent poem to the sea, Eve. I also really loved your quote..lovely and romantic, Enjoyed! :)
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Date: 9/26/2024 9:01:00 AM
There is great imagery in this rhymed poem. Hugs.
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Date: 9/26/2024 7:15:00 AM
Nice use of alliteration Eve and pretty description of the awesome seas, yet another gift from an all wise Creator
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/26/2024 8:39:00 AM
Thank you Tommy, you are so kind. As your work is awesome.
Date: 9/26/2024 3:29:00 AM
Lovely quote Eve, and yes there is something hypnotic about the sea that just mesmerises the watcher. Hugs Maria PS all the best for the contest.
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/26/2024 8:40:00 AM
Thank you Maria, you are so kind. Many blessings my friend
Date: 9/26/2024 3:20:00 AM
There's something magical about the sea,, love your quote too Eve. Tom
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Eve Roper
Date: 9/26/2024 8:41:00 AM
Always enjoyed going to the coast with a picnic lunch and family. Thank you so much my friend

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