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JAN ALLISON's Christmas Card

Santa intensely studies his list of children who have been naughty or nice. Mrs. Santa insists, "Hurry up or you're going to miss the sleigh full of gifts!" Oh, shush! They can't leave me behind. Rudolph's nose has lost its shine. Dasher is going blind. Dancer doesn't mind. Prancer is never on time. Vixen has problems staying in line. Comet gets tired of the reins on his spine. Cupid needs to unwind. Donner hates to be confined. Blitzen, well he is just plain lazy so it doesn't matter to him. They are all getting old and rather stay home sipping eggnog by the fireplace feeling tipsy and fine. 12/5/2017 Children Story
MERRY CHRISTMAS

Copyright © | Year Posted 2017




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Date: 12/8/2017 9:57:00 AM
I enjoyed reading this! Your charming words are a beautiful gift! Happy holidays :)
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Date: 12/7/2017 4:20:00 PM
Eve I can't see the pic anymore!!!!:-( hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/7/2017 6:05:00 PM
It is still there.. Andrea was having the same problem. Your card went out yesterday , I hope you enjoy it. Hugs
Date: 12/7/2017 5:38:00 AM
Lovely poem Eve..
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Date: 12/6/2017 3:30:00 PM
Lots of cute monorhyme in this one add up to make this a very fine rhyme on santa's reindeer.
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Date: 12/6/2017 5:33:00 AM
- A Christmas poem, with smiles Eve - So good you are at drawing - Luck in the contest - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Date: 12/5/2017 8:49:00 PM
WoW ! Eve, I really enjoyed this. The Santa that you drew is amazing. The card to Jan so entertaining. This write was filled with the" Christmas Spirit". Merry Christmas to you too:-) Alexis
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Date: 12/5/2017 6:49:00 PM
Oh Eve the pencil drawing is superb, you are so gifted my friend and the poem is charming!:-) hugs jan xx
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Date: 12/5/2017 5:51:00 PM
This must have been a lot of fun to write! Really gets one in the mood. I'll swop you a cider for an eggnog, Eve. Loved it
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