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Roller Coaster Ride On a Mountain Bike Trail

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A gravel mountain path, is shadowed between tall face ashen scab trunks, sprinkle occasional carpet moss, ferns, shrubs, ivy vines, and fallen live-in hollow logs. Underneath the aspen crown, friends ride their mountain bikes under clear sky. An amusement roller coaster, appear wearing down turns and bends, mark road behind them. Heartbeat reverberate, swimming before them. 8/11/2021

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Date: 8/13/2021 2:17:00 PM
Rollicking, rolling imagery crossing bike barriers into flora and fauna. Impressive fast paced verse. Congrats.
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Date: 8/13/2021 9:44:00 AM
What an imagery. So clearly, wonderfully penned. Congratulations, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/13/2021 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Marilene. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/12/2021 11:13:00 PM
This poem could be called imagism. Every detail in its place. Hugs
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/13/2021 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve
Date: 8/12/2021 3:06:00 PM
Each image so wonderfully created. I saw the scenes as I read your poem, Eve.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/13/2021 9:54:00 AM
Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve

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