Eve Roper Poet Rhyme

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Roller Coaster Ride On a Mountain Bike Trail

A gravel mountain path, is shadowed between tall 
      face ashen scab trunks, sprinkle occasional 
   carpet moss, ferns, shrubs, ivy vines, and fallen 
      live-in hollow logs. Underneath the aspen 
   crown, friends ride their mountain bikes under clear
      sky. An amusement roller coaster, appear 
   wearing down turns and bends, mark road behind them. 
      Heartbeat reverberate, swimming before them.


8/11/2021

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Greg Gaul August 13, 2021 at 2:17 PM Rollicking, rolling imagery crossing bike barriers into flora and fauna. Impressive fast paced verse. Congrats.

Marilene Evans August 13, 2021 at 9:44 AM What an imagery. So clearly, wonderfully penned. Congratulations, Eve. Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 9:54 AM Thank you, Marilene. Hugs Eve

Victor Buhagiar August 12, 2021 at 11:13 PM This poem could be called imagism. Every detail in its place. Hugs Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 9:54 AM Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve

Vijay Pandit August 12, 2021 at 3:06 PM Each image so wonderfully created. I saw the scenes as I read your poem, Eve. Eve Roper August 13, 2021 at 9:54 AM Thank you, Victor. Hugs Eve