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ROBIN RED BREAST BUMBLE BEE AND KATY CATERPILLAR

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Hi dear friends, I’m back after a bad shingles attack and straight after that bronchitis verging on pneumonia. Little Robin red breast bobbing up and down, Would take away with glee, anybody’s frown And friendly buzzing Mr Bumble bee delights, Us one and all, he does not sting, it’s not his thing. He visits flowers , red, yellow purple , pink and blue, Which attract him, loves their pollen and alluring hue. One day bumble bee and little robin decided to be human, So prepared for tea and pancakes, without the gluten, They saw Katy the caterpillar crawling on the lawn, And invited her to join them, the following morn at dawn, They all met for this fun occasion by the nearby river, But an uninvited visitor arrived with shiny wings, such a diva. A Hadeda elegant and loud of call thought she was an opera Singer, had one thing on her mind, which was Katy Caterpillar, She slowly walked on her stalk like legs towards this prickly Little insect, wanting to swallow Katy who was so wiggly, Down her gullet, but Robin red breast said no no, no, And Bumble bee agreed and said, I think you ‘d better go So with his wide spread wings the Hadeda flew away, Leaving Bumble bee and little Robin to enjoy their day, How wonderful was their idea for pancakes and tea. Another visitor arrives, so famous, known to you and me, Can you guess who. He wears a top hat, mutters crazy sayings, And carry’s a full tea pot , ‘do you want a cup of tea, Oh dear, oh dear, my or me, he or she or maybe you. He takes his watch out of his waist coat pocket and says, ‘I’m late, I’m late for a a very important date, no time to Say hello goodbye I’m late I’m late I’m late’ ‘It’s time for me to go, Au revoir from your dizzy beau.’ It was the Mad Hatter, of course, An Alice in Wonderland source. What happened to Katy caterpillar, well fearing For her life, Katy crawled under a nearby bush, Did not intend to be a snack, or mealtime mush. NB – THE WORDS UTTERED BY THE MAD HATTER – are both from the book Alice in Wonderland by Lewis Carroll and some of my own. HADEDA IBIS - referred to in South Africa as only Hadeda.

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Date: 11/15/2024 2:13:00 PM
Wow! Jennifer, this is marvelous! A real keeper that i received so many from! A fave for me! Thank you!
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Date: 10/29/2024 10:36:00 AM
A thoroughly charming and delightful read, Jennifer. Glad you're back and hope in good health after your ordeal.
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Date: 10/27/2024 10:58:00 AM
What an interesting story. Mad Hatter may not have to gulp any of the party guests down? I saw at the start of this you mentioned having shingles. My friend got it and said it was horrific. Are you doing ok? What a terrible thing to deal with.
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Date: 10/21/2024 9:51:00 AM
Oh, Jennifer, you have really been through fire! I am so sorry to hear that you have been so ill. Had shingles once. No fun! But, on the other side of the coin, so delighted you are back to PS with this absolutely delightful children's tale. I agree with Valsa, this would make a terrific book for children. On the surface it looks like a story for children but there are so many other themes you explore. Blessings of continued healing and health dear friend!
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Date: 10/12/2024 12:35:00 AM
Hi Jenny, sorry to hear that you had shingles. I had it twice. The second time l got it, it was so very painful. Hope you are totally free of your ailments by now. Wish you sound health and rising cheer. Enjoyed your interesting rhyme. ..ideal for a children's book of rhymes or stories
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Date: 10/1/2024 1:34:00 PM
I enjoyed reading your wonderful/fun write. I thought maybe you were on vacation. Glad you are better/back to writing. Love This/kids will also... Have a fun/blessed day writing away..............
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Date: 9/30/2024 12:06:00 PM
Hi Jennifer, glad you are ok now, I enjoyed this lovely story you told , best wishes
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Date: 9/30/2024 8:18:00 AM
Jennifer, reading this brought pleasure to me this morning. Thanks for that. It's quite an allegory for how we can take action to have some fun in life (put ourselves in the position of another species!) You're making me smile and that is worth so much!
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Date: 9/29/2024 6:05:00 PM
so charming poem, indeed, enjoyed the adventures of the sweet robin, one of my faves today best wishes
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Date: 9/28/2024 10:45:00 PM
Cute nursery rhyme. Pity you missed the contest.
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Date: 9/28/2024 6:26:00 PM
Love this Jennifer, I really enjoyed the read, very entertaining. I do hope you’ve fully recovered from your illnesses… Beryl
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Date: 9/28/2024 1:58:00 PM
Sorry to hear you were not well Jennifer, hope you are well on the road to recovery now. An enjoyable poem. Tom
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Date: 9/28/2024 12:26:00 PM
Whimsical and light, perfect for a children's book theme. Glad to hear you're ok. I know shingles can be excruciating
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Date: 9/28/2024 12:17:00 PM
A great romp of a poem! Katy better hide then fly when she is able. The hatter shall certainly open his eyes and mutter about familiar butterflies! Hugs-a-billion! Had shingles in my 20’s after one after another of my 3 kids got chicken pox. Hubby was out to sea.
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