Ride In the Subway For Twenty-Five Days

Drove for thirty minutes to Subway Station, 
Took a train for forty minutes, 
Got into another for only ten minutes, 
reached Queen's Park.

Mornings are hectic, 
found a seat beside the window, 
looked at all the faces, 
It was an university-bound train, 
many young faces, fashionable jeans, 
T-shirts with interesting quotes - from " life's a garden/dig it" to "Life is short/Talk Fast"! Some other people heading to downtown 
work-places; their faces were grim! were they having a fight with their bosses? And contemplating whether it was time to quit that job! 

Wasn't extreme cold yet, 
Only sweaters were enough! 
A few private school kids in white and blue uniforms, with smiling faces - bringing a lot of joy to their parents - taking subway.

Carried a book about art history to read. She really should have read the book before visiting Louvre five years ago! How many people read art history in the subway? She did, and enjoyed immensely, in between looking at all the faces she had never met before, and probably would never meet! 

This happened for twenty-five days! Twenty-five days of her life she took a subway, and headed to a hospital where they treat cancer-patients! Read an 
art-history book in the subway, and slogged to the hospital imagining some day joining the universities around! 

They treat the patients very well - probably
knowing  some of them won't be around for long! 
Wrote to her brother - feels like they are my children! I am supposed to text everyone when I am here. What worse can happen to me! 

Nurse told her - you don't need to take the subway, volunteers can pick you up! Mrs. Campbell  picked her up the next day - her husband had surgery for 
brain-tumour, he fainted while exploring in the rainforest! 
She told the kind lady - thank you so much. But I am still alright, perhaps someone else can use your help!
The lady seemed shocked - You are from India? Do Indians get cancer! I hear they have turmeric every single day! 

Twenty-five days! Twenty-five days were gone from her life! But there are many more days to come - she really enjoyed her ride in the subway! 

              
January, 2020

Featured Poem: Week of January 18, 2021

                                                FIRST PLACE
                                 "Most Original" Poem Poetry Contest
                                          Sponsor: Juliet Ligon
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Date: 5/25/2021 11:25:00 AM
An exquisite write dear Mala... A wonderful story with an optimistic note towards the end... '25 days of her life...gone...still she enjoyed her ride in the subway...'. loved your choice of the theme and how you gave emphasis on the '25 days of her life ... in the subway..'. well deserved win my friend... Hugs... ~ Ani
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/25/2021 3:43:00 PM
Thank you, Anitha. I admit - this is a very special story, and I wanted to write about it - it's the spontaneous expression of a rare incident. Glad you liked the theme. Really appreciate your beautiful inspiring words. Love ~ Mala
Date: 5/25/2021 10:39:00 AM
Congratulations on your win. WOW!!! What a story/write. I love this. What if one only had 25 days? What would people really do? Have a blessed day with your wonderful win......................
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Malabika Ray Choudhury
Date: 5/25/2021 10:54:00 AM
Paula, You are absolutely right. What if people had only those twenty-five days!!! I am so glad you read the poem. Really appreciate your encouraging words. Thank you. Love ~ Mala
Date: 5/25/2021 4:54:00 AM
Congratulations dear poet Mala..This poem deserves this awesome win! The sponsor is right....Truly a unique story!!
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Date: 5/25/2021 10:55:00 AM
Thank you, JCB - very kind of you. I really wanted to share this poem among our community. Juliet Ligon gave me that opportunity.
Date: 5/23/2021 5:55:00 PM
Congratulations, Malabika! You told a unique story. I like your emphasis on "25 days."
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Date: 5/25/2021 3:47:00 PM
Dear Juliet, Thank you so much for my placement in your contest. I agree - this story is unique, and I wanted to tell the story because it is unique. You have given me the opportunity to share the story with a community of talented poets. I really appreciate and feel honoured. BW ~ Mala
Date: 5/23/2021 4:20:00 PM
Mala, this lovely story captured my heart with its intrinsic curiosity about fellow riders, the strength of your character, the integral compassion and ending of song of hope. Loved it! Congratulations dear friend. So happy for you. Blessings for your day and coming week!
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Date: 5/23/2021 1:59:00 PM
Congrats, Mala! Yes, they said, turmeric does wonders!!! Have a great Sunday.
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Date: 5/23/2021 2:54:00 PM
Thank you, Mariilene! What an honour! I wouldn't know unless you told me. Really appreciate!
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