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"I am better off healed than I ever was unbroken." Beth Moore I thought I was as fragile as a gossamer web woven by a spider spinning exquisite silk. My tears were polished pearls of morning dew, nourishing flowers before they could wilt. But I am not cut from the cloth of that ilk, and salty streams I cry would wither their petals. When love was lost, I did not break for I am made of much sturdier mettle. Although my heart was filled with aching, courageously it refused to surrender to death. I took shallow breaths, afraid it was breaking, but found that I was still whole and intact. The fracture merely scratched my surface, making a dent. My countenance rent, not torn. I did not shatter from the impact, but arose, reborn and refreshed from slumbering remorse. No longer are there dark corners in my heart. I forgave him for harsh words once spoken. My fortitude is stronger than I ever thought. Sadness and misery are fading memories of a relationship no longer controlling my life. From depths of disparage, I've finally awoken. Life's loose threads have been snipped and the frayed edges of rejection were clipped. When I look in a mirror I am wearing a smile, pleased with my unbroken reflection.

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Date: 11/14/2021 4:32:00 AM
Wonderful poetry Jenna, when in remorse one’s right on course… Belle
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/14/2021 5:04:00 AM
Thank you, Belle. That’s a cute mantra.
Date: 11/13/2021 8:23:00 AM
Great pen Jenna with real strength of conviction along with the pain gone by, nice imagery, and insightfulness too. BLessings, Gordon
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Date: 11/14/2021 5:03:00 AM
Thanks so very much for the great remarks, Gordon.
Date: 11/13/2021 5:45:00 AM
I feel the pain and strength in your beautiful poem. Well done Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/13/2021 6:02:00 AM
Good morning, Mark. Life experiences can drag us down, but getting back is the best healer. Thanks for reading me.
Date: 11/13/2021 2:05:00 AM
When we get knocked down we emerge stronger and our line of defence becomes impenetrable. Well written Jenna, enjoy your weekend. Tom
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/13/2021 2:17:00 AM
Good morning, Tom. You're right. It's the getting back up that strengthens us. My weekend is off to a good start, and I sincerely hope yours is, too. Thanks!
Date: 11/12/2021 10:18:00 PM
Encouraging poem for those still in the struggle back to light, Jenna. I especially liked, "I did not shatter from the impact, but arose, reborn and refreshed from slumbering remorse." Been there, done that. It is the surface that takes the beating, the strength is deeper, the soul eternal. Love, Bill
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/13/2021 1:29:00 AM
Bill, Your comments are always such joy to read. Thank you for liking this one, and for letting me know which lines you particularly preferred. It's very much appreciated. Hugs.
Date: 11/12/2021 10:29:00 AM
Only a Thunderbird can rise from the flames! Well done! Aloha!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/12/2021 12:05:00 PM
Then a Thunderbird I shall be. Thank you!
Date: 11/12/2021 9:38:00 AM
Inspirational strength Jenna!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/12/2021 12:04:00 PM
Thanks ever so much, James.
Date: 11/12/2021 9:07:00 AM
There is depth of thought in this beautiful rhymed poem. So well done.
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/12/2021 11:30:00 AM
Many thanks for your kindness, Victor.
Date: 11/12/2021 8:34:00 AM
Exceptional writing, Jenna, as usual. I think this poem should head the list in Constance's contest. It flows from beginning to end with such grace. Fantastic!
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Jenna Logan
Date: 11/12/2021 11:29:00 AM
Thank you for always being so supportive of my poetry, Milt. I've stopped trying to guess what a sponsor wants, so I just write what fills my thoughts and hope for the best.

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