Queen of Flowers

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written in couplets by ten lines which highlights top blessings on a crowned flower

Underneath the currents shifting sand turning over tides touch waves salted Moonlight of a silver whisper echoes Standing still time breathless satin silk baited Velvety white rose of purity dancing on air nods your petal softness opens out from the heart claimed Fairest in the garden beauty upon thorns sits sweetly scented in a summer fragrance kissed When the sun awakens entering your colour shines crowned by the dewdrops of morning warmly blessed

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Eileen Manassian

Date: 3/20/2017 4:54:00 PM

Romance is what you write best, Liam. Lovely piece, my dear.

Paul Callus

Date: 3/12/2017 2:10:00 PM

Captivating imagery, Liam! I love the beauty of this "queen of flowers' as seen through your eyes...even the thorns do not manage to take away any of its pure assets. ~ Best regards // paul

Gary Bateman

Date: 3/7/2017 2:22:00 PM

Hello Liam Mate!! An extraordinary penned couplet which speaks to the heart, and touches one's soul with devout passion!! Superb!! Cheers and Best, Gary

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 3/6/2017 1:34:00 PM

- Queen of flowers, the most beautiful of all Liam :) - A gem, beautifully written :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)

Dorian Petersen Potter

Date: 3/6/2017 12:53:00 PM

Hi Liam!:))Wow!Wow!Wow!This is the most very beautiful,romantic,tender,sweet,passionate n' captivating love , my dearest friend Liam.Just dazzling!All so very beautifully written.Just awesome!Another very beautiful,sparkling diamond from your very golden glowing pen.I love it!A most very beautiful, heartfelt,romantic,dreamy,heart melting away enchanting love poem to be held very close to my heart.smiling.This is so very beautiful n' sweet!So wonderful!Just amazing!I truly enjoy it!A true glowing golden gem!Just beautiful!Outstanding poem.Your pen is truly mighty golden!A 7 + + + + +!A Fav!To me you're always the best in everything Liam.So very beautiful,romantic,gentle and sweet.I really hope n' pray alot you're okay in everything, Liam.Please keep positive.Always keeping you in my thoughts n' prayers.Keep your faith!Keep your love hopes n' follow your dreams always too:))Wishing you a very lovely week!In His light God bless you always!:))Love n' hugs!xoxox D.^O^

Jan Allison

Date: 3/6/2017 12:52:00 PM

what gorgeous gorgeous imagery Liam:-) hugs Jan xx