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Present Tense

don’t hurry today...surrender to the present tense of thanksgiving! PD's Contest: Solitude -- Monoku or ONE LINE poem #4

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Bl Devnath

Date: 2/10/2016 11:48:00 AM

Beautiful present tense. Wish you congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always,bl

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 2/9/2016 5:42:00 PM

NETTE, Congratulations On your win. I truly enjoyed every entry placed on my Solitude list. Stop by my latest blog "Silence Ululates" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~

Daver Austin

Date: 12/1/2014 6:03:00 PM

Really good modern haiku. the domestic touch is refreshing. Love, daver

Skat A

Date: 12/9/2010 10:02:00 PM

Yes! Happy to all of us, Nette I just read your comment on my blog. That is cute that you asked where am I. Well i'm the one in back of my daughter silly. Have a nice one*LUV~SKAT

Poet Destroyer A

Date: 11/26/2010 10:24:00 AM

loved this one hope you had a happy one as well and of course enjoy your black friday lol,, this is a hectic day for shoppers and workers,, enjoy your weekend..p.d.

Wilma Neels

Date: 11/26/2010 1:23:00 AM

Awesome uplifting write Nette, so much enjoyed this morning.. Hope you are having a good day :) Wilma

Andrea Dietrich

Date: 11/25/2010 10:28:00 PM

WAs that last one about getting beaten up in the stores? haha. Hey, Nette, are you from U.S? for some reason I was thinking you were from another place. And yet you seem very aware of what happens the day after Thanksgiving. Oh, are you not Phillipino? Well, I enjoyed these find haiku tonight. You are my last poet to see tonight. Time for me to get out of here. LUv, Andrea

Skat A

Date: 11/25/2010 8:05:00 PM

ENJOYED & LOVED IT ,THE SAME TO YOU, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat

Linda-Marie Sweetheart

Date: 11/25/2010 8:47:00 AM

Enjoyed your creative write today Nette my friend.. and a very H.T.Day to u and yours also.. feel the LUV...luv..

Carolyn Devonshire

Date: 11/25/2010 12:53:00 AM

So joyful, Nette! Thanks so much for sharing this uplifting poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you! Love, Carolyn

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/24/2010 10:40:00 PM

mangoes definitely are the best 'no? Mango cream pie or sliced as it is works for me :) happy for you that you are enjoying it here so much-- :D-- pasko na nga!! kelangan ko na nga ilabas mga christmas decors-- ok gotta go for now-- see you around Nette & thanks as well for your lovely comments-- :) -- nikko :)

Kabuteng P.Ink K.

Date: 11/24/2010 10:30:00 PM

yikes, the holidays sure can be stressful-- but haha I live for that stuff!wish you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)