Present Tense

don’t hurry today...surrender to the present tense of thanksgiving!


PD's Contest: Solitude -- Monoku or ONE LINE poem #4
Copyright © | Year Posted 2010

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Devnath  Avatar
February 10, 2016 at 11:48 AM
Beautiful present tense. Wish you congratulation my lovely friend. Loved always,bl
A   Avatar
February 9, 2016 at 5:42 PM
NETTE, Congratulations On your win. I truly enjoyed every entry placed on my Solitude list. Stop by my latest blog "Silence Ululates" if you like. Always & Forever ~LINDA~
Austin Avatar
December 1, 2014 at 6:03 PM
Really good modern haiku. the domestic touch is refreshing. Love, daver
A  Avatar
December 9, 2010 at 10:02 PM
Yes! Happy to all of us, Nette I just read your comment on my blog. That is cute that you asked where am I. Well i'm the one in back of my daughter silly. Have a nice one*LUV~SKAT
A   Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 10:24 AM
loved this one hope you had a happy one as well and of course enjoy your black friday lol,, this is a hectic day for shoppers and workers,, enjoy your weekend..p.d.
Neels Avatar
November 26, 2010 at 1:23 AM
Awesome uplifting write Nette, so much enjoyed this morning.. Hope you are having a good day :) Wilma
Dietrich Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 10:28 PM
WAs that last one about getting beaten up in the stores? haha. Hey, Nette, are you from U.S? for some reason I was thinking you were from another place. And yet you seem very aware of what happens the day after Thanksgiving. Oh, are you not Phillipino? Well, I enjoyed these find haiku tonight. You are my last poet to see tonight. Time for me to get out of here. LUv, Andrea
A  Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 8:05 PM
ENJOYED & LOVED IT ,THE SAME TO YOU, best holiday wishes*Luv~Skat
Sweetheart Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 8:47 AM
Enjoyed your creative write today Nette my friend.. and a very H.T.Day to u and yours also.. feel the LUV...luv..
Devonshire Avatar
November 25, 2010 at 12:53 AM
So joyful, Nette! Thanks so much for sharing this uplifting poem. Happy Thanksgiving to you! Love, Carolyn
K. Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 10:40 PM
mangoes definitely are the best 'no? Mango cream pie or sliced as it is works for me :) happy for you that you are enjoying it here so much-- :D-- pasko na nga!! kelangan ko na nga ilabas mga christmas decors-- ok gotta go for now-- see you around Nette & thanks as well for your lovely comments-- :) -- nikko :)
K. Avatar
November 24, 2010 at 10:30 PM
yikes, the holidays sure can be stressful-- but haha I live for that stuff!wish you the best in the contest :) --nikko :)
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