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Out of Place

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Essence
The Essence, created by Emily Romano, is a short, structured form of 2 lines. There are six syllables in each line, with an end rhyme, and an internal rhyme. The internal rhyme is across both lines, and you may have more than one Essence with the same theme to form a verse.

As Autumn days grow cold leaves gild green pathways gold. A thing once swung with grace, a swing looks out of place. This summer-only toy, looks lonely, stripped of joy. (Essence) 8/17/2021

Copyright © | Year Posted 2021


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Andrea Dietrich
Date: 8/29/2021 11:23:00 AM
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Beautiful, Emile, just beautiful.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/30/2021 6:10:00 AM
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Thanks so much, Andrea, you have made my day my friend, Emile.
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Eve Roper
Date: 8/28/2021 7:22:00 PM
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Great rhyme , Emile, congratulations in your form and win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2021 8:35:00 AM
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Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
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L Milton Hankins
Date: 8/28/2021 8:21:00 AM
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Congratulations on your achievement in the contest, Emile.
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/29/2021 8:36:00 AM
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Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
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Janice Canerdy
Date: 8/28/2021 6:04:00 AM
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A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Emile. Janice
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/28/2021 6:11:00 AM
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Thanks, Janice, I appreciate and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
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Joseph May
Date: 8/28/2021 5:51:00 AM
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Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/28/2021 6:11:00 AM
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Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate the win my friend, Emile.
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Harry Horsman
Date: 8/17/2021 10:54:00 PM
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Love this Emile, so good to read a poem of yours again..
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Emile Pinet
Date: 8/18/2021 7:18:00 AM
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Thanks, Harry, I appreciate your visit my friend, Emile.

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