Out of Place

As Autumn days grow cold, frost gilds green pathways gold. A thing once swung with grace, a swing: seems out of place. This summer-only toy; looks lonely: stripped of joy.
Copyright © | Year Posted 2021

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Dietrich Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 11:23 AM
Beautiful, Emile, just beautiful.
Pinet Avatar
August 30, 2021 at 6:10 AM
Thanks so much, Andrea, you have made my day my friend, Emile.
Roper Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 7:22 PM
Great rhyme , Emile, congratulations in your form and win in Joseph's contest. Hugs Eve
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 8:35 AM
Thanks, Eve, I appreciate your comments my friend, Emile.
Hankins Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 8:21 AM
Congratulations on your achievement in the contest, Emile.
Pinet Avatar
August 29, 2021 at 8:36 AM
Thanks, Milt, I appreciate your support my friend, Emile.
Canerdy Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:04 AM
A big CONGRATS on your well-deserved win, Emile. Janice
Pinet Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Thanks, Janice, I appreciate and welcome your comments my friend, Emile.
May Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 5:51 AM
Very nicely penned Emile, Congrats on your win
Pinet Avatar
August 28, 2021 at 6:11 AM
Thanks, Joseph, I appreciate the win my friend, Emile.
Horsman Avatar
August 17, 2021 at 10:54 PM
Love this Emile, so good to read a poem of yours again..
Pinet Avatar
August 18, 2021 at 7:18 AM
Thanks, Harry, I appreciate your visit my friend, Emile.
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