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One Moment In Your Eyes

One moment in your eyes and suddenly I find tranquility, again... In a flash the memory returns of who we used to be. One threescore year and ten each second is re-lived. In a single flash of smile, the world is ours again. One moment you are in my presence, and the next we part like a last Amen! It is your heart that keeps me young, time and time again time and time again time and time again !

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Alesia Leach

Date: 9/15/2024 12:45:00 PM

A beautiful love poem!!

Joe Dimino

Date: 9/13/2024 7:43:00 PM

The past is only the past if entirely forgotten. Fond memories go a long way -- like helping to producing such a lovely poem.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/14/2024 3:43:00 AM

so special to read your words, you always make my heart happy when you do Joe, have a blessed weekend !

Duke Beaufort

Date: 9/13/2024 3:05:00 PM

Rose, How wonderful it is to think back. My goodness time goes by so quickly for us all. I am smiling at the thought that you can share such a touching feeling with all of us. My day is complete after reading this!!!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/13/2024 4:35:00 PM

Such a pleasure to receive such kind well thought out words Duke, may your weekend be full of inspired thoughts, and smiles of course !

Jay Narain

Date: 9/13/2024 10:11:00 AM

A timeless love poem.

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/13/2024 4:34:00 PM

Thank you Jay, always smiling when I see your comments, have a blessed weekend dear poet .

Ink Empress

Date: 9/13/2024 8:10:00 AM

Awwn bless such love timeless and never getting cold! How blissful and heartfelt is this dear sweet rose! I love it! In times of hardships and many more in ones eyes we find serenity and warmth! Thats love! One that can calm everything! Pleasure reading this! Sending you light always!

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/13/2024 4:34:00 PM

So glad you enjoyed the poem Ink, may you have a wonderful weekend filled with poetic diamonds, studded with verses that make the moon and sun smile alongside us, and you. :)

Daniel Henry Rodgers

Date: 9/13/2024 4:56:00 AM

Dear Rose, Oh so romantic with wonderful images of an enduring love into our old age. What more could be asked for! A wonderful poem to kick off the weekend. - Blessings, My Dear Friend, Daniel

Mystic Rose Rose
Date: 9/13/2024 4:33:00 PM

Romance is what keeps the heart mulched in softness, dear Daniel, thank you for reading, have a wonderful weekend :)