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No Way Out

No way out Tree branches cover my veiw of a moon lit sky, A cold foggy mist layers the ground, I see theres wind, I hear no sound, My heart beating in my chest is the only thing being so loud, I need to stay strong, So I can fix all that feels so wrong, breathing would help me stay calm, But my mind feels boxed in, here I have no freinds, here is a dark place, Im still in Gods good grace, So the sun came up for me that very next day. By: Scotty Skaggs

Copyright © | Year Posted 2012




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Date: 12/1/2013 1:51:00 AM
Scotty, glad to see God's grace taking effect at the end. .. much of every line is deep imagery describing a trap feeling, that needs light... the first line of the tree branch in the way, is my fave line.... thanks for the visit. .Linda
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Date: 3/12/2012 6:07:00 AM
A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Scotty. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol
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Date: 3/10/2012 8:00:00 PM
I like this poem
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