Scotty Skaggs Poet Rhyme

No Way Out

No way out


 
  Tree branches cover my veiw of a moon lit sky,
         A cold foggy mist layers the ground,
         I see theres wind, I hear no sound,
       My heart beating in my chest is the only thing 
      being so loud, I need to stay strong, So I  can fix all 
   that feels so wrong, breathing would help me stay calm, 
But my mind feels boxed in, here I have no freinds, here is a dark
 place, Im still in Gods good grace, So the sun came up for me 
that very next day.

By: Scotty Skaggs

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Poet Destroyer A December 1, 2013 at 1:51 AM Scotty, glad to see God's grace taking effect at the end. .. much of every line is deep imagery describing a trap feeling, that needs light... the first line of the tree branch in the way, is my fave line.... thanks for the visit. .Linda

Carol Sunshine Brown March 12, 2012 at 6:07 AM A warm welcome to PoetrySoup I offer to you Scotty. I wish for you the best in your writing endeavors whatever they may be. May you find inspiration by reading some of the poetry written here by other poets. May the sun shine on you that you might find great joy in your life. Love, Carol

Stormi Skaggs March 10, 2012 at 8:00 PM I like this poem