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New Beginnings - a Shadorma

Wandering, from my tired shadow- toward the sun. Looking back, as dusk’s mystic elixir, liquidates my past. ~30 Dec 2015~

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Date: 1/16/2016 10:11:00 PM
David, congrats on your awesome win. Love LINDA :-)
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Date: 1/12/2016 11:17:00 PM
David, Congrats on your New Beginnings win. LUV~ SKAT
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Date: 1/11/2016 3:29:00 PM
This is one of the best entries that I have read so far, David. Every line counts! ~ Congratulations on a worthy win. // paul
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:36:00 PM
David, I love the beautiful imagery you used! Congrats on your win! Eve
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Date: 1/11/2016 1:45:00 PM
David, fantastic imagery in this! Congrats on your placement and thank you for supporting my contest! Love, Kim
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Date: 1/11/2016 2:11:00 PM
thanks for the placement Kim...this was a very unique and interesting contest....I appreciate your time and effort
Date: 12/31/2015 4:09:00 AM
Very good ... CayCay
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Date: 12/31/2015 4:05:00 AM
I love the imagery David think this will do well for you:-) hugs Jan xx
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Date: 12/31/2015 3:14:00 AM
Perfectly written and done! Good luck for the contest!!! Happy new year :)
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