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I boarded my ship all ready to sail off to see and to learn much more. large room with two beds balcony to relax on fresh fruit to enjoy Dinner time is coming so change your clothes and head for the dinning room with the big table covered with linen cloth. large menu to read decisions galore oh my save room for dessert Off to sleep to dream of the island we will see when we awake. swaying trees cool breeze drinks in coconuts for me a swim at the beach My vacation has gone by so very fast and now it is time to go back home. off the ship I go hate airport and flight to home yes tomorrow work Date Written: 8/11/2020 Let the Pens Flow - Haibun Poetry Contest Sponsored by: Jenish Somadas

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Date: 8/11/2020 7:12:00 PM
You've nailed a real dream cruise, and even remembered to include the 'reality intrudes part' at the end. Lovely penned, Paula! :) gw
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/20/2020 1:03:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your kind words. So glad you like it. Have a wonderful day....................
Date: 8/11/2020 12:07:00 PM
Make it your home...wherever you are...A lovely dream...
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/11/2020 12:17:00 PM
Thank You, for writing. You are right, "Make it your home...wherever you are." I would love to live on a ship. Guess I can dream. Have a great day writing away..................