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My Passing Husband

Lord, I know I should not ask. You took my beloved husband. (God Talking) I needed him more than you. One day he will greet you to be with us. God's heavenly angels are watching over you. My husband you took His name in heavenly book He gave me a look Date Written: 7/14/2020 Note: The top part of this is a very small part of what I just wrote as a card/letter to a very dear friend. Her husband just died. I had to shorten it for the contest.

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Date: 7/17/2020 3:22:00 AM
Grief is such a time the words have not been written yet, but you have done a fine job my friend.
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/17/2020 12:05:00 PM
Thanks for your note. The long letter was hard to write. Enjoy your day.................
Date: 7/14/2020 3:18:00 PM
. 154 Words . Our Very Best . Yes, I am the raw vision, of my true, self wonton, and willing to succeed within this moment infinitely supported and surrendered to all of us, by our Creator! When I dance gratefully under the storms, all that I act upon, that is the hardest to accept about myself, within the mirror of this life, when I do, I am my very own savior. As I suck out, all of the yummy marrow of this life, sharing this with all others! I am the terror, lost when I am not, when, truly, I need for not! I am an ever-evolving creature of our Creator, mistakes, and all! "Saints," they say, can be no more, nor, do anything, more, or less, but; live for another, to share in no personal regrets for, themselves! Yes, just as much as I am willing to grow, as I let go, to learn, I am at my very best!
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 7/15/2020 10:36:00 AM
Thank You, for reading and writing. Enjoy your day.................
Date: 7/14/2020 3:11:00 PM
Nicely said, Paula, It should comfort her soul some. Good luck in the contest.
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Date: 7/17/2020 12:06:00 PM
Thank You, for writing and for your good luck. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day..............