' My Origin '

============================================================== ~*~ " one blood's flowing in veins ... one heart's beating in rhythm - a MOTHERLY LOVE " thirsty? blood is here to quench my thirst hungry? starving? body's here to fill my tummy life is here to sacrifice breath is here even its very last tears fell in melodious harmonic beat laughs jibe in embellishments of lyrical blithe cries mourn in echoing hymn of woe words sounds in profound cyclic tune love flows incessantly ... my queen, owning the golden crown of my life's honor my sculptor who shapes and molds me up my painter who puts the ravishing spectral hues in my flawed life my architect who builds the home of my life's essence my doctor who cures every imperfections, weaknesses and frailties and my number 1 fan ... who's always there to be proud at my BEST . thank you for what you do unconditionally~~ now, when you're at thirst, my blood is here to quench yours when you're at hunger, my flesh is here to fill yours ~~you and I as 1 ... one blood's flowing in veins one heart's beating in rhythm a motherly love that keeps me breathing in life~~~~ "I LOVE YOU MOM" ~*~ ============================================================== *-* JUN-JUN VILLANUEVA *-* "MOTHER" contest by A Rambling Poet

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Date: 9/2/2011 5:12:00 PM
another gem for your crown, jun!! congrats big time.. whoo..:) huggs!
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Date: 8/31/2011 4:19:00 PM
Congratulations on your win jun-jun. Nicely done
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Date: 8/29/2011 1:42:00 PM
A beautiful category chosen to describe and give thanks to your mam. Well done and blessings from Paul
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:55:00 AM
Congratulations on your shared second place win in my contest, with this stunning poem, just beautiful ~~
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Date: 8/29/2011 11:24:00 AM
I love how you compared mom with our body part needs. I love the third stanza and your quote. Congratulations.
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Date: 8/29/2011 7:09:00 AM
Congratulations on your well deserved placement in Constance's "Mother" contest Jun-Jun. Love, Carol
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Date: 8/29/2011 3:44:00 AM
hey jun-jun great dedication, congrats on this and My Origin, David
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:53:00 PM
congrats jun-jun on your second place win with this outstanding entry luv.. most amazing words..
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:51:00 PM
Congratulations on your win, I knew you would do well,such a great poem. Lee
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Date: 8/28/2011 10:23:00 PM
Congrats on your win, Jun-Jun. Excellent piece. Nice going. Ralph
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Date: 8/28/2011 9:28:00 PM
What a joy this will bring to her heart, jun jun!! She will cry with happiness upon reading such a lovely poem!
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Date: 8/27/2011 11:54:00 PM
A beautiful poem, and tribute to your Mom. Well done . Lee
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