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My Love Skates

"Fragments and crumbs of life, all the little pieces"
John Ruskin, 1853
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Every Saturday I loved going skating,
all week that special day kept me waiting.
My dad would drop me off and pick me up,
always in my hand a cool water cup.
Each week I rented my skates,
it was less than pieces of eights.
One day my dad said just wait,
I did not know he would be so very great.
He came out with a skate box in hand,
he had this all well planned.
I opened the skate box up,
I felt like a new born pup.
A box filled with love,
my new skates fit like a glove.
Date Written: 8/25/2020 Note: This is a true story. I was eight years old. My dad was the best. 4 Place All The Little Pieces Contest Judged: 9/3/2020 Sponsored by: Constance La France

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Date: 9/10/2020 2:51:00 AM
Paula, congratulations on your win in my challenge All The Little Pieces with this wonderful write _Constance
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/10/2020 12:32:00 PM
Thank You, for writing. It was an honor to have a win. So glad you like this write. Have a wonderful day..................
Date: 9/4/2020 10:52:00 AM
- A lovely poem from reality, Paula :) - A wonderful memory :) - Congratulations on your win :) - hugs // Anne-Lise :)
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 9/4/2020 11:00:00 AM
Thank You, for your note and your congratulations. Glad you like this one. It was an honor to have a win. Have a wonderful day with a hug...................
Date: 8/25/2020 2:29:00 PM
Sweet, sweeter, and sweetest. Great memory and tribute to you both. Smiles for Miles, Gershon
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Paula Goldsmith
Date: 8/26/2020 9:17:00 AM
Thanks for your sweet note. Glad you like it. Have a wonderful day writing away..................

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