Get Your Premium Membership

Mr Peanuts' Big Blind Date

Poet's Notes
(Show)

Become a Premium Member and post notes and photos about your poem like Gray Squirrel.


Mr. Peanuts' Big Blind Date I Like To Call The Scrub Jays: "Mr. Peanut..." - I Treat 'Em All - Like They're The Same Bird. Mr. Peanut Always Shows Up The EarlyBird... -Shocks All The Mourning Doves -To A Panicked Disarray... Grabs The Big YummY Peanut On Top That I Left Out For Him... And Drops It To The Ground Super Fast! Then Knocks All The Corn All Over And Sunflower Seeds Everywhere, And Maybe Eats One, But PECKPECKPECKPECKPECK!!! Everything Everywhere! *!**!!*!*!!!**!!*!** ****All At Once***** And Maybe Finds Another Peanut, To Flee Off With That... Or Keeps Broadcasting Everything With Seeds, Looking For More... Or Doesn't Find Any More And Beak-Chops The One That It Dropped On The Ground... TAKE THAT! Or Just Flys Off And Leaves It... Behind. Who Knows? Crazy Bird... Has No Idea. I CAN LOVE Mr. Peanut... From Here... Whether It Shows Up Or Not. -It Clearly Doesn't Care -If I Do. -Gray Squirrel 05-21-2025

Copyright © | Year Posted 2025




Post Comments

Poetrysoup is an environment of encouragement and growth so only provide specific positive comments that indicate what you appreciate about the poem. Negative comments will result your account being banned.

Please Login to post a comment

Date: 5/23/2025 9:36:00 AM
Now One Just Came, Grabbed A Peanut Stuck Down In The Side Of The Bowl (Of Not-Any-More-Peanuts,) Pranced Around, Then Proudly Flew Away... Didn't Even Spill One Kernal Or Seed! Clever Bird. Showed Me!
Login to Reply
Date: 5/21/2025 8:02:00 PM
Hello Gray, how are yah? U know I can't grasp what is it about Peanut's blind date. Like u, u couldn't get that the Divine Lord is in the room, I don't know if I'm right. Thank you for reading some of my poems. The Divine Lord chose me to spread the words so after reading a chapter of Baltimore Catechism, I'm typing about it for people. Jac---> my Jackie is a bad girl. So that we have a Jac in girls & short for my real name.
Login to Reply
Squirrel Avatar
Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/23/2025 2:58:00 PM
I LOVE Your Selection Of Quotes, ThO. Wherever They're From :) Peace.
Squirrel Avatar
Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/23/2025 2:53:00 PM
I'm Not A Girl Tho, Just Don't Need No Bad Girl Talk. I Just Don't Know What Room It Means, That's All.
Squirrel Avatar
Gray Squirrel
Date: 5/21/2025 8:11:00 PM
Thanks, Jac (: Good Luck.

Book: Reflection on the Important Things