Month of My Heart

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Month of my Heart The month of March holds a place in my heart On a lovely spring day love came my way Forever loving sweethearts from the start. Spring brings magic o'er nature's world of art Trees blossom, pretty flowers bloom and sway The month of March holds a place in my heart. I look in your eyes and I still see stars In the mirror of my soul to this day Forever loving sweethearts from the start. Dawn’s chorus of birds as a new day starts Fledglings on wings coming out on display The month of March holds a place in my heart. The song love put in my heart tops all charts A refrain on continuous replay Forever loving sweethearts from the start. Though years have flown we’re still one of two halves Since those magic moments of yesterday Forever loving sweethearts from the start The month of March holds a place in my heart. ~ * ~ 9th August 2020

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Duke Beaufort

Date: 3/11/2024 7:25:00 AM

Beryl, it’s another march and I’m hoping the good feelings are still going strong. It is an interesting time watching things come out of hibernation.

Fin Chuuk

Date: 4/1/2023 1:23:00 PM

Wow! This one is fantastic. In fact I have never read one with this form before. March is a month of hope. Splendid work, Belle. :)

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/2/2023 10:45:00 AM

Thank you Fin, it’s good to try different poetry forms, appreciated… Belle :)

Harry Horsman

Date: 4/12/2021 7:11:00 PM

Love to take in one's first post here on soup, not disappointed here Belle, beautiful is this gem.

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 4/12/2021 7:42:00 PM

Thank you for taking me back to that first poem I posted on PoetrySoup Harry, so delighted with your comment, will take a peek at the first poem you posted. Belle

Silent One

Date: 10/14/2020 8:44:00 AM

You did this villanelle so well, it is not an easy form.. It flows so well and March is month of hope as spring arrives..

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/14/2020 3:37:00 PM

Thank you Silent One, it’s good fun to try writing different forms of poetry, though, as you say, it’s not always easy. Belle

John Watt

Date: 8/9/2020 9:55:00 PM

Belle, You make a good case for March being a favorite month: the beginning of love, and the renewal of nature. You tackled a challenging poetic form with gusto and aplomb. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I hope you find it a place of mutual encouragement and support. ~ John

Beryl Edmonds
Date: 10/9/2020 4:05:00 PM

Thank you John. Belle