Beryl Edmonds Poet Villanelle

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Month of My Heart

Month of my Heart
The month of March holds a place in my heart
On a lovely spring day love came my way
Forever loving sweethearts from the start.

Spring brings magic o'er nature's world of art
Trees blossom, pretty flowers bloom and sway
The month of March holds a place in my heart.

I look in your eyes and I still see stars
In the mirror of my soul to this day
Forever loving sweethearts from the start.

Dawn’s chorus of birds as a new day starts
Fledglings on wings coming out on display 
The month of March holds a place in my heart.

The song love put in my heart tops all charts
A refrain on continuous replay
Forever loving sweethearts from the start.

Though years have flown we’re still one of two halves
Since those magic moments of yesterday 
Forever loving sweethearts from the start
The month of March holds a place in my heart.
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9th August 2020

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CayCay Godwin June 10, 2026 at 4:02 PM After reading your 'stoner' poem, it occurred to me that I may not have ever read your poems. I have TBI so I'm not sure, but I don't think we have crossed paths. I wished to check out your 1st poem. Your pen is smooth and creative. Villanelle's aren't easy for many people, I enjoy writing them (well, all 3 of them) and I very much enjoyed the flow and rhymes coming together so smoothy in this poem. Beautiful Beryl Edmonds June 10, 2026 at 5:21 PM Dear CayCay thank you very much. It’s so nice when one’s first poem is read, it brings back the feeling of excitement having somewhere to display poems that are out there for the world to see. Blessings, Beryl

Richard Lamoureux June 30, 2025 at 6:20 AM What a wonderful first offering to the soup. I felt refreshed as I read your words. Beryl Edmonds July 1, 2025 at 5:22 PM Ah thank you Richard, it’s good to have one’s first poem read again. Very much appreciated… Beryl

Duke Beaufort March 11, 2024 at 7:25 AM Beryl, it’s another march and I’m hoping the good feelings are still going strong. It is an interesting time watching things come out of hibernation. Beryl Edmonds July 1, 2025 at 5:25 PM Thank you Duke, have only just read your comment, ‘twas a pleasant treasure … Beryl

Fin Chuuk April 1, 2023 at 1:23 PM Wow! This one is fantastic. In fact I have never read one with this form before. March is a month of hope. Splendid work, Belle. :) Beryl Edmonds April 2, 2023 at 10:45 AM Thank you Fin, it’s good to try different poetry forms, appreciated… Belle :)

Harry Horsman April 12, 2021 at 7:11 PM Love to take in one's first post here on soup, not disappointed here Belle, beautiful is this gem. Beryl Edmonds April 12, 2021 at 7:42 PM Thank you for taking me back to that first poem I posted on PoetrySoup Harry, so delighted with your comment, will take a peek at the first poem you posted. Belle

Silent One October 14, 2020 at 8:44 AM You did this villanelle so well, it is not an easy form.. It flows so well and March is month of hope as spring arrives.. Beryl Edmonds October 14, 2020 at 3:37 PM Thank you Silent One, it’s good fun to try writing different forms of poetry, though, as you say, it’s not always easy. Belle

John Watt August 9, 2020 at 9:55 PM Belle, You make a good case for March being a favorite month: the beginning of love, and the renewal of nature. You tackled a challenging poetic form with gusto and aplomb. Welcome to Poetry Soup, I hope you find it a place of mutual encouragement and support. ~ John Beryl Edmonds October 9, 2020 at 4:05 PM Thank you John. Belle