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~ Mercies Child ~

I am the essence of My Makers glory, now! The humbled child, of His wonderous hands.... All that I am, good, is a reflection of His predestined desires Born in His image, anew, from a once, but mere feeble man Fragile within all of his ways, made, to fall to temptations taste Given the robe of the world to wear, but when yet, still a young naive youth.... That all that one could wish for, hope, that was always readily there! Fame and popularities, envies amongst his peers Never alone, and always surrounded, by pretty faces, everywhere Living the dream of the world, that most young men, never did dare The life of the parties, the gatherings, that always beckoned, his presence there Like cards he had played, one upon another, these cards, within all of their shades.... Up and down the staircase, around the block and behind the house To all of the dances, the dances, where he would always appear Everyone, everywhere, everyway, wanted, to be a part of this show Until one day, it all died inside, and the bright lights, they began to lose their glow As at a gathering one night, aside the rivers banks, a beautiful girl, that had became a card of her own.... Standing as she approached with tears in her eyes, crying, as she sadly spoke From a broken heart she had held, that he, had once sadly broke, now, piercing his very own! Suddenly awakened, from this slumbering sleep, and feeling so deeply burned While darkness laughed, at a product it had made, a darkened child, of its very own.... Entering the searching years, now, the shadowed, the Jekyll and the Hyde, of whom they had known? Truly, a boy interrupted, sliced by the emptiness, that had buried his heart Within a secular world, a world filled with glitter, lust, and, cold! Until one night, one day, one moment, one dream, "He," came.... To introduce Himself, and to reveal this mercy, upon a once, merciless soul Lost, but later to have realized, throughout the forthcoming years that would unfold It was a lifetime of lessons, lessons, that were forever drawn By the hands of his loving Creator, whom had watched him, all along.... For now, I am "My Fathers Child," the essence, of "His Very Son" Born out of time, delivered, from the darkest of nights Another story that was written, that satan had known, a very long, long time ago! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Mercies Child ~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2008




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Date: 8/15/2009 4:42:00 AM
CONT.and as we are,no more no less,thanks for reminding me through your wonderful poem that even if nobody loves me God will ove me forever and accept me in his hands with open arms,this is your best write john,it speaks from your soul and it touches my heart,making me remeber how lucky i am to have God loving me in this crazy way,my very true lover he is.......outstanding it has to be a fav..to my favs--John-love charma(the mercies child of the rainbow);)
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Date: 8/15/2009 4:33:00 AM
Mercies child-the child who lived the material life to the full surrounded by many,always part of the show living a dream of ecapism from God,till that day a girl touched his heart,helped him see other things which much more value in life,helped him see he was the son of God,that was the day that changed his life.............the mercies child in his father's arms forever more--well penned John,God have many meanings to find us and unconditioned love,he is the only one who loves us always cont
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Date: 6/19/2009 9:43:00 AM
John, this poem shows how beutifully you truely are what a gifted poet. Through these intricate and in depth lines there lies a boy yet, to be a man and take responsibility that he never knew until one moment in his life he woke up and was unhappy of the person he had become, so he changed his life and for the better no doubt. The valley of your soul is so deep and lovely John, forgive yourself we are all human and sometimes people and ourselves forget that. Wonderful write from the heart.
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Date: 12/31/2008 3:28:00 AM
mercy grand poem--beautiful John!! all the best!!
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Date: 12/10/2008 2:25:00 PM
John sorry for your hard times above. You seem a well polished gemstone. We are all God, part of the body of God made from godstuff. Thanks for all your support. Debbie
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Date: 12/10/2008 11:25:00 AM
hiya john, thanks for your feed back, im not sure if I can get that station in uk shame as we mising out by the sounds of it, I like ucb radio or the christian premiere one, I love God of wonders and your thoughts of it brings my next best song to mind Hungry, i'm falling on my knes its a beautiful song, by a lady called chaterine scott. my leanne always gets on her knees to that song she loves it and one way Jesus by hill song. anyway God bless you much love from diane
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Date: 12/10/2008 8:49:00 AM
Read my new poem Let's Get Lost with an open mind. . . . Love Your Friend Alexandria ^u^
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Date: 12/10/2008 6:14:00 AM
My dear Friend, once again you have words dancing delicately and delightfully as they fall from your pen, beautiful words. I apologise for not being about lately, my youngest child has been unwell, I have spent long hours by his side nursing him, but it was not serious, the hours were spent wrapped up in blankets, hot chocolate and his little smile enjoying mummy to himself, but now he is bouncing around again and mummy is redundant, until the next cold ;) God Bless you John, always yours Julie
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Date: 12/10/2008 4:18:00 AM
Thank you John for the warmest of comments. You have a mighty big heart my friend that you dispense so freely on the soup.
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Date: 12/9/2008 6:32:00 PM
When you come back read my dad poem. . . Love Your Friend Alexz ^_^ >.<
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Date: 12/9/2008 6:11:00 PM
Read my new poems, please. . . . And did you listen to my band yet? Love Your Friend Alexz
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Date: 12/9/2008 1:53:00 PM
John how did I miss this. This is beautiful. I love reading your poetry in Christ's season. Another wonderful write depicting Our heavenly father. God bless you John and those you love. Michael
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Date: 12/9/2008 10:25:00 AM
if james and leeane want cartoons on or doctor who or sara jane adventures i go in the spare room and play it we use it as a mini office just to study and play our music, anyway God bless you john happy holidays much love from diane
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Date: 12/9/2008 10:24:00 AM
thanks for all your feed back John it means a lot, isn't it just great that just when we think we know God he reveals even more glorious things to us he neevr stops pouring out those blessings upon us, whatever we give hime he returns us a hundred fold more back, its beyond our wildest dreams, ans yes it's still my fave song, by chris tomlin, God of wonders it's called the univerese declares his majesty, oh got to play it now heheheh, I play worship songs all the time
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Date: 12/9/2008 5:25:00 AM
What a powerful, thought wrenching write. John you written this piece well and you captured my mind throughout. Chris.
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Date: 12/9/2008 4:03:00 AM
Did you listen to Hollywood Undead yet? Love Your Friend Alexandria ^_^
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Date: 12/8/2008 2:56:00 PM
A very beautiful and inspirational piece of depth and honesty....Love, Sara:)
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Date: 12/8/2008 6:53:00 AM
Hey to you, John! If you'd been "delivered, from the darkest of nights", I'm sure it was so that a new star would be noticed in the Heavens. One, most certainly, that lit a spark and flames within your soul. A well thought out and 'delivered' piece..See, you also can give birth by your notions and ideas. Certainly a mind and heart probe! Wishing you and yours the best, John...God bless!! Love you, Mikki
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Date: 12/8/2008 6:52:00 AM
wonderful john, a lovley write, God bless you always much love from diane
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Date: 12/8/2008 6:32:00 AM
When I reached the part He introduced Himself I thought of the song Amazing Grace. This is a wonderful write. If we can't forgive we cannot receive forgiveness. I have forgiven but forgetting is harder, especially when some things continue to be. But I also know that I was given these experiences for a reason and with time and healing, in time God will reveal the greater purpose of it all. He set me apart for a reason. (Hebrews 2:18) Love Robin
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Date: 12/8/2008 2:30:00 AM
Well thank goodness for every word. Like Helen said, this reads like an epic tale of discovery - good for you for listening, and doing - most cannot. love, Kristin
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Date: 12/7/2008 11:51:00 PM
WoI have John this is quote an epic! By the way I have 'visited' you several times and I always appreciate your comments on my work. Thank you once again, and Seasons Greetings to you and yours.
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Date: 12/7/2008 7:33:00 PM
Did you listen to Hollwood Undead yet? Love Your Friend Alexz ^u^ P.S. I'm just trying to get rid of all that anger, dislike and hurt out of my system.
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