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 At times deaths vale splits open
 and shadows weave in and out.
 Your presence dances past me
 gently kissing my forehead.
 Rushing air catches my breath 
 and I am filled with peace as
 your silhouette passes by.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.08.2014
Nette Onclaud Contest 
Silhouette of a Heptagonet
7th

Copyright © | Year Posted 2014




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Date: 11/21/2014 8:58:00 PM
Catching up reading all the wonderful winners ...I love the poignant beauty you created, Brenda. Congrats!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/21/2014 11:04:00 PM
Thanks Rhonda
Date: 11/16/2014 5:08:00 PM
Excellent write Brenda, I think at times we all feel the subtle hint of guidance from those who have passed.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:20:00 PM
Thank you John
Date: 11/16/2014 10:01:00 AM
Brenda, stopping by again to say congratulations for your win on your poem. Hugs, Sanda
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:20:00 PM
Thank you Sandra
Date: 11/15/2014 5:47:00 PM
mellow artwprd so profound,dr urma..vthank you for joining my contest and big congrats, Fredicryry8!.. hugggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:19:00 PM
Ok, thanks I guess.
Date: 11/15/2014 7:41:00 AM
Nicely done, congrats on the win Brenda...huggs
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Kayod5
Date: 11/15/2014 7:14:00 AM
dropping back with my congrats brenda:-) hugs jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:17:00 PM
Thanks Jan
Date: 11/15/2014 12:07:00 AM
We all need that silhouette of someone special..could it be a loved one who is gone or God himself,or even somewhere who is srill here.Knowing someone cares bring comfort and peace.Some shadows wil always protect us.I love your penned beauty dear sweet lady.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/18/2014 7:16:00 PM
Thanks Charmaine
Date: 11/10/2014 7:39:00 AM
glad to have read this today, Brenda! great write!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:56:00 AM
Thank you Hija
Date: 11/10/2014 7:05:00 AM
Shadowed presence of a loved one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:55:00 AM
Thanks Sara
Date: 11/10/2014 5:21:00 AM
In other words, thoughts of our beloved ones are always with us, even when they lie dormant at the back of the mind. Time heals, but we do not forget. This is such a lovely write, Brenda...a 7 rating for you. Take care. // paul
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:54:00 AM
Thank you Paul
Date: 11/10/2014 12:13:00 AM
Made for a great red Brenda,
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/10/2014 7:53:00 AM
Thanks Sudha
Date: 11/9/2014 11:28:00 PM
wow, it is really cool how you thought outside the box for your entry. I love yours!!!
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Date: 11/9/2014 10:32:00 PM
Beautiful, Brenda. Loved ones that come to us as shadows from behind the vale...very haunting and awesome. Good luck in the contest. Fav, Hugs, Sandra
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:55:00 PM
Thanks so much Sandra.XO
Date: 11/9/2014 10:21:00 PM
Brenda, intoxicating write!!
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:54:00 PM
Thanks Dave
Date: 11/9/2014 10:14:00 PM
Brenda, The Silhouette you portray here in most enchanting, and I like the imagery too!! Good Luck in the Contest!! Best Always, Gary
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:54:00 PM
Thank you Gary.
Date: 11/9/2014 8:51:00 PM
These special moments pass quickly but memory lingers on . . . very nice, may you always have the peace that fills hearts with hope.
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 10:53:00 PM
Thanks David.
Date: 11/9/2014 6:42:00 PM
Awe, I love this one Brenda. A presence of a loved one. :) hugs dear friend good luck in the contest eve
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Date: 11/9/2014 5:29:00 PM
this is hauntingly beautiful Brenda:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx
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Brenda Meier-Hans
Date: 11/9/2014 5:31:00 PM
Thanks Jan.