Brenda Meier-Hans Poet Verse

Loves Silhouette

At times deaths vale splits open
 and shadows weave in and out.
 Your presence dances past me
 gently kissing my forehead.
 Rushing air catches my breath 
 and I am filled with peace as
 your silhouette passes by.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.08.2014
Nette Onclaud Contest 
Silhouette of a Heptagonet
7th

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders November 21, 2014 at 8:58 PM Catching up reading all the wonderful winners ...I love the poignant beauty you created, Brenda. Congrats!! Brenda Meier-Hans November 21, 2014 at 11:04 PM Thanks Rhonda

John Lawless November 16, 2014 at 5:08 PM Excellent write Brenda, I think at times we all feel the subtle hint of guidance from those who have passed. Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:20 PM Thank you John

Sandra Haight November 16, 2014 at 10:01 AM Brenda, stopping by again to say congratulations for your win on your poem. Hugs, Sanda Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:20 PM Thank you Sandra

Nette Onclaud November 15, 2014 at 5:47 PM mellow artwprd so profound,dr urma..vthank you for joining my contest and big congrats, Fredicryry8!.. hugggs Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:19 PM Ok, thanks I guess.

Kayod5 Kayode November 15, 2014 at 7:41 AM Nicely done, congrats on the win Brenda...huggs Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:17 PM Thanks Kayod5

Jan Allison November 15, 2014 at 7:14 AM dropping back with my congrats brenda:-) hugs jan xx Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:17 PM Thanks Jan

Charmaine Chircop November 15, 2014 at 12:07 AM We all need that silhouette of someone special..could it be a loved one who is gone or God himself,or even somewhere who is srill here.Knowing someone cares bring comfort and peace.Some shadows wil always protect us.I love your penned beauty dear sweet lady. Brenda Meier-Hans November 18, 2014 at 7:16 PM Thanks Charmaine

Hija De La Luna November 10, 2014 at 7:39 AM glad to have read this today, Brenda! great write! Brenda Meier-Hans November 10, 2014 at 7:56 AM Thank you Hija

Sara Kendrick November 10, 2014 at 7:05 AM Shadowed presence of a loved one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Brenda Meier-Hans November 10, 2014 at 7:55 AM Thanks Sara

Paul Callus November 10, 2014 at 5:21 AM In other words, thoughts of our beloved ones are always with us, even when they lie dormant at the back of the mind. Time heals, but we do not forget. This is such a lovely write, Brenda...a 7 rating for you. Take care. // paul Brenda Meier-Hans November 10, 2014 at 7:54 AM Thank you Paul

Sudha Chandra November 10, 2014 at 12:13 AM Made for a great red Brenda, Brenda Meier-Hans November 10, 2014 at 7:53 AM Thanks Sudha

Andrea Dietrich November 9, 2014 at 11:28 PM wow, it is really cool how you thought outside the box for your entry. I love yours!!!

Sandra Haight November 9, 2014 at 10:32 PM Beautiful, Brenda. Loved ones that come to us as shadows from behind the vale...very haunting and awesome. Good luck in the contest. Fav, Hugs, Sandra Brenda Meier-Hans November 9, 2014 at 10:55 PM Thanks so much Sandra.XO

Gary Bateman November 9, 2014 at 10:14 PM Brenda, The Silhouette you portray here in most enchanting, and I like the imagery too!! Good Luck in the Contest!! Best Always, Gary Brenda Meier-Hans November 9, 2014 at 10:54 PM Thank you Gary.

David Meade November 9, 2014 at 8:51 PM These special moments pass quickly but memory lingers on . . . very nice, may you always have the peace that fills hearts with hope. Brenda Meier-Hans November 9, 2014 at 10:53 PM Thanks David.

Eve Roper November 9, 2014 at 6:42 PM Awe, I love this one Brenda. A presence of a loved one. :) hugs dear friend good luck in the contest eve

Jan Allison November 9, 2014 at 5:29 PM this is hauntingly beautiful Brenda:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Brenda Meier-Hans November 9, 2014 at 5:31 PM Thanks Jan.