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Loves Silhouette

At times deaths vale splits open
 and shadows weave in and out.
 Your presence dances past me
 gently kissing my forehead.
 Rushing air catches my breath 
 and I am filled with peace as
 your silhouette passes by.


Written by Brenda Meier-Hans 
11.08.2014
Nette Onclaud Contest 
Silhouette of a Heptagonet
7th

Copyright © Brenda Meier-Hans | Year Posted 2014

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Rhonda Johnson-Saunders Date: 11/21/2014 8:58:00 PM Catching up reading all the wonderful winners ...I love the poignant beauty you created, Brenda. Congrats!! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/21/2014 11:04:00 PM Thanks Rhonda

John Lawless Date: 11/16/2014 5:08:00 PM Excellent write Brenda, I think at times we all feel the subtle hint of guidance from those who have passed. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/18/2014 7:20:00 PM Thank you John

Sandra Haight Date: 11/16/2014 10:01:00 AM Brenda, stopping by again to say congratulations for your win on your poem. Hugs, Sanda Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/18/2014 7:20:00 PM Thank you Sandra

Nette Onclaud Date: 11/15/2014 5:47:00 PM mellow artwprd so profound,dr urma..vthank you for joining my contest and big congrats, Fredicryry8!.. hugggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/18/2014 7:19:00 PM Ok, thanks I guess.

Kayod5 Kayode Date: 11/15/2014 7:41:00 AM Nicely done, congrats on the win Brenda...huggs Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/18/2014 7:17:00 PM Thanks Kayod5

Jan Allison Date: 11/15/2014 7:14:00 AM dropping back with my congrats brenda:-) hugs jan xx Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/18/2014 7:17:00 PM Thanks Jan

Charmaine Chircop Date: 11/15/2014 12:07:00 AM We all need that silhouette of someone special..could it be a loved one who is gone or God himself,or even somewhere who is srill here.Knowing someone cares bring comfort and peace.Some shadows wil always protect us.I love your penned beauty dear sweet lady. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/18/2014 7:16:00 PM Thanks Charmaine

Hija De La Luna Date: 11/10/2014 7:39:00 AM glad to have read this today, Brenda! great write! Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/10/2014 7:56:00 AM Thank you Hija

Sara Kendrick Date: 11/10/2014 7:05:00 AM Shadowed presence of a loved one..Reads like a winner to me..Thanks for the visit to my page..Sara Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/10/2014 7:55:00 AM Thanks Sara

Paul Callus Date: 11/10/2014 5:21:00 AM In other words, thoughts of our beloved ones are always with us, even when they lie dormant at the back of the mind. Time heals, but we do not forget. This is such a lovely write, Brenda...a 7 rating for you. Take care. // paul Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/10/2014 7:54:00 AM Thank you Paul

Sudha Chandra Date: 11/10/2014 12:13:00 AM Made for a great red Brenda, Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/10/2014 7:53:00 AM Thanks Sudha

Andrea Dietrich Date: 11/9/2014 11:28:00 PM wow, it is really cool how you thought outside the box for your entry. I love yours!!! Login to Reply

Sandra Haight Date: 11/9/2014 10:32:00 PM Beautiful, Brenda. Loved ones that come to us as shadows from behind the vale...very haunting and awesome. Good luck in the contest. Fav, Hugs, Sandra Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/9/2014 10:55:00 PM Thanks so much Sandra.XO

Gary Bateman Date: 11/9/2014 10:14:00 PM Brenda, The Silhouette you portray here in most enchanting, and I like the imagery too!! Good Luck in the Contest!! Best Always, Gary Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/9/2014 10:54:00 PM Thank you Gary.

David Meade Date: 11/9/2014 8:51:00 PM These special moments pass quickly but memory lingers on . . . very nice, may you always have the peace that fills hearts with hope. Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/9/2014 10:53:00 PM Thanks David.

Eve Roper Date: 11/9/2014 6:42:00 PM Awe, I love this one Brenda. A presence of a loved one. :) hugs dear friend good luck in the contest eve Login to Reply

Jan Allison Date: 11/9/2014 5:29:00 PM this is hauntingly beautiful Brenda:-) good luck in the contest:-) hugs Jan xx Login to Reply Brenda Meier-Hans Date: 11/9/2014 5:31:00 PM Thanks Jan.