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~ Kimala ~

In the cool of the morning shade Within the stillness of this moment A slight breeze, that ushers.... Loving thoughts of her my way! Standing by the carousel Sitting upon the rivers banks Walking hand in hand.... Amid the serenity, of sunsets gaze~ Always in my heart Wherever I go, she is there "Smiling".... With her enchanting eyes Windows to a soul~ So very precious, unto me! The tenderness of her heart As innocent as a child "She Is".... I hear the softness of her voice The most beautiful of melodies~ "An Angel," when she speaks! All of the reasons That fill these hopes With her touch.... As a beacons light~ A thousand moments I shall forever see "Her Beauty" Amid.... A mid-mornings dream! ~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~~ ~ Kimala ~

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Date: 11/2/2008 1:36:00 PM
Hello John; in answer to your question .. ( The falling leaf Persephone Her heaven in the canopy returns to the underworld Save in the Fall she is for a moment; free When all her beauty in multitudinous glory is beheld ) .. simply a poem about Autumn .. "Kimala" .. succulent with memories and love; watery with acceptance of that love; Honeyed with appreciation... great writing John !
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Date: 11/2/2008 3:46:00 AM
What a perfect memory. :) a love filled write full of heart and soul. blessings to you, Kristin
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Date: 11/2/2008 1:52:00 AM
aww this is a sweet poem john, my husband is called joshua, it was so great when God brought us together, we both had heartaches before but when we met God just made everything so right and made a complete christian family, in name and nature, we are living proof that God make broken people whole again, hr makes us complete, Amen and God Bless you john my dear friend and brother in Jesus our Lord. from diane.
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Date: 11/1/2008 4:18:00 PM
Goodness John! This one just sweeps me off my feet! You have romantic nature, it's just screaming to come out in this lovely poem to your beautiful subject~ My, oh, my, my melting heart! These men are on a roll! ~ :) The ladies on Poetry Soup love this side of you! ...Carrie
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Date: 11/1/2008 1:14:00 PM
WOW! is everyone up here in love except me, first John Loving, then Michael Degenhardt, now you. LOL just kidding it is noce to know that men can be loving romantic and eloquent, awesome write, lucky woman, teel her she may have some competiotion, me, just kidding, take care John, D-nyce
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Date: 7/10/2014 1:15:00 PM
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Date: 11/1/2008 10:49:00 AM
Such a beautiful write John. I could really see the carousel and that river. What a precious and romantic man you are. A lovely time to dream such a lovely dream. Love, Nigel
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