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"IT" On the way home, I notice a change around my domain. Shivers prick all the way down my spine. I inhale a smell so evil- IT is now ITS’ name. Without hesitation, I pass my hopscotch sidewalk. Creeping up my screeching steps, my doors were unlocked. I hear a man’s footsteps below. There IT was waiting for me all over again, Ready to steal the light that shines on my face. Trying to find ITS’ way under my skin. This time I was prepared. Not scared! "Finally," I started to enjoy the way this evil dwells. Only I could see and feel its impulsive behavior. Always profiling me and, trying to screw demons inside. IT is like a retarded disorganized killer. Leaving a trail and odor that IT is around. A look so randomly Overlooking my criteria. I can smell its decomposing body. Its voice inflicts my soul with injuries of guilt. I feel IT moving very slowly, IT is proceeding near the door! I wait! IT turns! I yell! IT cunningly smile my way. I smile back. With the thought Death was the only way to do us (IT) apart. Now IT is my creation! A murder! A crime! A hidden grave! IT wants revenge. All I wanted was to be alone. Now IT is there. Haunting our home. ~A~

Copyright © | Year Posted 2011




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Date: 2/4/2016 11:04:00 PM
it is scary **SKAT**
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Date: 4/25/2014 4:13:00 PM
PD Such a hauntingly eerie and creepy write. It could be the start of a horror or thriller. LOL Thank you for the nice comment on my Robin Hood poem.
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Date: 5/21/2013 10:27:00 PM
just stopped by to say hi and thanks for your recent comments, PD. I hope all is going well for you. Luv, Andrea
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Date: 5/9/2013 9:49:00 AM
remembering this oldie of yours. I see Linda's comment beneath mine and I think how strange it is that she is not here any more. I sure do hope she is ok. We just can't know. I tried calling her and her phone was disconnected. Let me know if you ever hear any word on Linda, the sweetheart.
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Date: 6/16/2011 9:25:00 PM
OK PD my BFF.. got title: gas price lies now am I writing about the confusion of Americans on why and to forgive government in slam..oh..not good at that form..hate bashing ..but I accept the challenge luv.. just clarify for me.. or is category only on gas, price, lies..???thankxxx
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Date: 6/5/2011 8:47:00 PM
thanks for the nice comments on my poems. I had a feeling what IT was...you obscure IT and explain IT at the same time. My compliments.. Scarlett
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Date: 5/26/2011 11:34:00 AM
Slightly disquieting, but excellent write! We all have our demons...wonder if mine is anything like yours? Regards, Robert.
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Date: 5/25/2011 1:20:00 PM
oops PD! Just read your comment on this write... Guess "IT" got me too... LOL Lay
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Date: 5/25/2011 1:18:00 PM
PD ~ I love how "IT" has so many definitions for so many!!! To leave the "IT" nameless was the best part of the write. Allowing us the readers to fill "IT" in. So creative... the "IT" for me would be the "Depression Demon" as I believe it is for you. Love this write my friend... as always... Lay
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Date: 5/16/2011 10:00:00 PM
just stopping by to say HEY, PD!!
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Date: 5/5/2011 7:01:00 AM
great write my suggestion mind you but I think the spelling is incorrect for the meaning of the word sew, I think it should be sow, as in planting demons. the other one would be as in like a needle and thread stitches. If that is what you wanted. I do love this though great write.
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Date: 5/4/2011 11:54:00 AM
excellent...a sordid vice? perhaps...
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Date: 5/2/2011 6:56:00 PM
Great write!! Thanks for the comments and encouragement!!
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Date: 5/2/2011 6:54:00 PM
Great write!! Thanks for the comments and encouragement!!
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Date: 4/30/2011 1:42:00 AM
Very creative and haunting P.D. You are very talented ,hope you re fine dear friend !
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Date: 4/29/2011 1:53:00 PM
um not sure i understand it sorry.
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:51:00 PM
I really enjoyed this. I love your topics. -Leigh Anne
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:19:00 PM
Wishing u a pleasant evening PD my BFF as we are getting ready to call it a night after a storm day of severe thunderstorms and lots of heavy lightening.. torrential rains and now all quiet.. promising to be a sunny weekend with high temps.. oh.. your BFF forever ..
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Date: 4/28/2011 7:59:00 AM
a little scary... but effectively getting the point across... a who doesn't love a good suspense
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Date: 4/27/2011 5:25:00 PM
Intriguing! I loved how this poem build the suspense and kept me wondering till the end.
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Date: 4/27/2011 3:56:00 PM
A good read, a good write. I just flat out enjoyed "IT"!!
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Date: 4/27/2011 10:24:00 AM
Beautifully written. Such a wonderful play on words..."IT," so vastly defined.
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Date: 4/26/2011 11:28:00 PM
Is it alcohol that is taunting you?? Or is it a monster at its finest?? I liked this=)) Thanks for stopping by to send conrats on my "Once Upon A Time poem...
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:05:00 PM
Hehe i love IT, they are very interesting phenomenons. Nice write Cory
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Date: 4/26/2011 8:24:00 AM
Wow, it reminded me of that Stephen King movie with the scary clown? Was that It? Your home needs a spiritual cleansing, no matter which faith you are there are things which can be done so IT will leave! If you want more info Soup mail me. Light & Love
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