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Innocent Are They Still

I saw this little girl at the very first time playing innocently with her playmates so fine she doesn't care even her undy is too lousy she goes on and play around recklessly as innocently and nosy! Hearing a striptease rap she quickly dance in snap with it's beat, she seem no shame wiggling her body in it's beat, release following the steps on the video, she tease. One day, she joined a game with this 10 year old boy doctor-nurse game, they have fun doing it, oh, boy 'till they found out this foul play doing like adults' foreplay why, they have thought this way? They were caught doing the "deed" innocent minds suddenly disappeared lust seen on their face, are erased, when someone saw them at this sinful deed so alarming indeed! Are these kids innocent still? kids that are roaming on streets and to neighbor's place? Are they the one to be blame by these acts? Who would be blamed for these uncommon sight and misconducts? Kids of today, INNOCENT ARE THEY STILL? (This case is reported to me yesterday by one of my neighbor.) Inner Whispers

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Date: 5/9/2014 5:04:00 PM
Love the take on this particular theme. very well expressed; congrats on a fine win. // paul
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:53:00 AM
hello Paul! Haha, wow..i never expect i will win! Thank you so much!
Date: 5/9/2014 4:00:00 PM
Slam Inner! I like the way you write politically. This is a slam. You placed 4th and that good girl. Verlena
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:52:00 AM
Hello Maam Verlena, thank you so much! What a very nice surprise this Mother's day! Thank you!
Date: 5/1/2014 11:54:00 AM
Instincts have no instructions... Good structure and pace to this write Whisper. I like the challenge of ethical poetry. J.A.B.
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:54:00 AM
Thanks Justin! Your comment counts most! Wow! Thanks for the drop!
Date: 5/1/2014 8:05:00 AM
this is so sad!!! I have 4 girls and I don't want them to be involved in this kind of behaviour... Who would be blamed.. THE ROTTEN SOCIETY OF JUAN DELA CRUZ!!..pornographic materials were scattered everywhere and our authorities are playing blinds, mutes and deafs for this!!! ... DIscipline MUST starts at home.. and as a parent, we should protect our children from this harmful realities... this is a great awakening poem, Carole!! thanks for sharing it w/ us... CHANGE MUST BE PLAYED NOW!!! ;o((
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Date: 5/11/2014 2:55:00 AM
Aiyah, take good care of your girls. Hands on dapat talaga. Salamat sayo. Happy Mother's Day!

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