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Innocent Are They Still

I saw this little girl at the very first time 
playing innocently with her playmates so fine 
she doesn't care even her undy is too lousy
she goes on and play around recklessly
as innocently and nosy! 

Hearing a striptease rap 
she quickly dance in snap
with it's beat, she seem no shame 
wiggling her body in it's beat, release
following the steps on the video, she tease.

One day, she joined a game with this 10 year old boy 
doctor-nurse game, they have fun doing it, oh, boy
'till they found out this foul play
doing like adults' foreplay 
why, they have thought this way? 

They were caught doing the "deed"
innocent minds suddenly disappeared 
lust seen on their face, are erased, 
when someone saw them at this sinful deed
so alarming indeed! 

Are these kids innocent still? 
kids that are roaming on streets and to neighbor's place? 
Are they the one to be blame by these acts? 
Who would be blamed for these uncommon sight and misconducts? 
Kids of today, INNOCENT ARE THEY STILL? 

(This case is reported to me yesterday by one of my neighbor.) 

Inner Whispers
Copyright © | Year Posted 2014

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Callus Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 5:04 PM
Love the take on this particular theme. very well expressed; congrats on a fine win. // paul
Whispers Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 2:53 AM
hello Paul! Haha, wow..i never expect i will win! Thank you so much!
Walker  Avatar
May 9, 2014 at 4:00 PM
Slam Inner! I like the way you write politically. This is a slam. You placed 4th and that good girl. Verlena
Whispers Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 2:52 AM
Hello Maam Verlena, thank you so much! What a very nice surprise this Mother's day! Thank you!
Bordner Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 11:54 AM
Instincts have no instructions... Good structure and pace to this write Whisper. I like the challenge of ethical poetry. J.A.B.
Whispers Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 2:54 AM
Thanks Justin! Your comment counts most! Wow! Thanks for the drop!
Torres Avatar
May 1, 2014 at 8:05 AM
this is so sad!!! I have 4 girls and I don't want them to be involved in this kind of behaviour... Who would be blamed.. THE ROTTEN SOCIETY OF JUAN DELA CRUZ!!..pornographic materials were scattered everywhere and our authorities are playing blinds, mutes and deafs for this!!! ... DIscipline MUST starts at home.. and as a parent, we should protect our children from this harmful realities... this is a great awakening poem, Carole!! thanks for sharing it w/ us... CHANGE MUST BE PLAYED NOW!!! ;o((
Whispers Avatar
May 11, 2014 at 2:55 AM
Aiyah, take good care of your girls. Hands on dapat talaga. Salamat sayo. Happy Mother's Day!
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