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In The Shadow of Sunlight

Quote: When earth’s one half faces the sun, the other half goes to restful sleep – Anonymous
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With tilted axis
And elliptical orbit
Earth shimmies like Prima ballerina

With a graceful pirouette
She faces the Sun’s heat
Smooths out glare on her feet

At night she parties
Filling veins of her green
With stimulating goodness sap

Moon, the proud practice partner
Strenthens her seasonal jumps
Allows her to Celebrate

Appreciative Sun shines
More on the partner
To see well the glow on ballerina

Unmindful of Newton’s theories
Lush lives thrives on this duet
In the shadow of sunlight

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Karen Jones

Date: 8/27/2024 5:10:00 AM

Congratulations on your wonderful poem placing!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/27/2024 9:36:00 PM

thank you dear poet, I am glad you liked it. thank you for the kind pleasant words. Blessings & cheers.

Karen Croft

Date: 8/25/2024 6:40:00 PM

Congratulations on your placement!

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/25/2024 7:02:00 PM

thank you for the kind visit dear poet. I feel happy when I see your words on my page. thank you. Blessings & cheers.

Paula Goldsmith

Date: 8/23/2024 12:57:00 PM

Congratulations on your win. What a great write/story. Great Ending... Have a blessed day writing away...........

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/23/2024 10:02:00 PM

you are kind, you are so cheerful in disposition dear poet. I am grateful for your blessings and words. thank you.

Edward Ibeh

Date: 8/22/2024 4:43:00 AM

Heartiest congratulations on your win in my contest with this amazing piece, Thriveni:--) Thoroughly enjoyed.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/22/2024 5:22:00 AM

Thank you very much for this kind message and for your precious time and pleasant visit dear poet. thank you.

David Crandall

Date: 8/12/2024 7:44:00 AM

Hmm, science, poetry, and ballet weave together to show the weaving of the sun's, earth's, and moon's orbits.

thriveni c mysore
Date: 8/13/2024 5:28:00 AM

your visit brings me joy dear poet. yeah weaving with strange RBG colors, so different I mean, am happy you noticed the threads. I am grateful for your visit dear poet friend, thank you.