* In My Perfect World

In my Perfect World I want there to be Peace
for all Mankind, wars, hate, evilness, would be
gone no one would be hungry, homeless, beaten
sick, broken or lonely all would be so Beautiful.

Children, would play in the streets day or night
never having to worry if they will be taken away
by people who would just Hurt them terribly.
They would never have to live in fear or be scared.

Animals, would be treated like they should loved,
fed, cuddled to run the streets, alleys and not ever
have to run away from hands or people who might
do them harm they would be snoozing in the sunlight.

The weather would be warm birds flying overhead
singing their songs the rains would be gentle enough
that we could go stand in it and splash in the puddles
never having to worry about the destruction it brings.

Everyone, being kind to each other neighbors helping
neighbors with out expecting anything in return. 
Your word of Honor being enough to seal a deal.
Leaving doors unlocked at night knowing it was safe.

Children would not be told they were useless but they
would be told how Precious they truly are and how much
they are loved, wanted by the Parents who had them.
They could sleep soundly at night never be harmed.

In My Perfect World it would be a bit like Heaven but
I would not have the streets paved in Gold or Pearly
White Gates for the entrance I leave that to God.
My entrance would say 'Come In Peace One and All'!

Copyright © | Year Posted 2010



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Date: 7/14/2010 11:29:00 AM
Many congratulations Rhoda on your win in Carol's fine contest with this wonderful poetry >> James
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Date: 7/13/2010 8:39:00 PM
Congratulations Rhoda, on your poem's success in the competition. Agape, Moses
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Date: 7/13/2010 6:45:00 PM
Congrats Rhonda on your winning poem in the Perfect World contest with this magnificent write and wonderful win for u to so enjoy.. with luv..
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Date: 7/13/2010 4:38:00 PM
Congratulations Rhonda on placing in my "In My Perfect World Contest" July 13, 2010. Love, Carol
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Date: 6/18/2010 5:26:00 PM
A nice world that you have created to be perfect. Goold luck in the contest
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