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I Just Want To Dance

we think that we will die one day and that we are as close as we are right now I just want to dance dance with you let the world see you

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Don Johnson

Date: 8/30/2012 2:48:00 AM

loving day by day ... great poem babe....

Harry Horsman

Date: 8/22/2012 9:57:00 AM

lovely poem, enjoyed.

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 8/25/2012 10:06:00 AM

Thank you very much, Harry! oxoxo hugs Laila

Honestly J.T.

Date: 8/13/2012 5:45:00 PM

nice write. forget the worries of this life and just dance - JH

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 8/16/2012 3:43:00 AM

Thank you for coming back to read the poem mine, appreciate it .. Laila

Anne-Lise Andresen

Date: 8/13/2012 12:36:00 PM

Well said Laila, just dance...- oxox love mom :)

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 8/16/2012 3:47:00 AM

I dance all day ... lol .... - xoxo love Laila

Nette Onclaud

Date: 8/13/2012 12:32:00 PM

whoo, an upbeat kind of winsome piece, laila... just wanna make me dance!... you sway!.. have a lovely time!.. i think this falls under 'verse?'... huggs!;)

Laila Andresen Mjelde
Date: 8/16/2012 3:50:00 AM

thanks for the nice words and for taking the time to read my poem Nette ... and thanks for your help ... I've changed it to verse.. I'm not good at knowing what genre my poems are written in... :( xoxo Laila