Laila Andresen Mjelde Poet Verse

I Just Want To Dance

we think that we will die one day
                         and that we are as close as we are right now
                                             I just want to dance
                                                 dance with you
                                            let the world see you

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Don Johnson August 30, 2012 at 2:48 AM loving day by day ... great poem babe....

Harry Horsman August 22, 2012 at 9:57 AM lovely poem, enjoyed. Laila Andresen Mjelde August 25, 2012 at 10:06 AM Thank you very much, Harry! oxoxo hugs Laila

Honestly J.T. August 13, 2012 at 5:45 PM nice write. forget the worries of this life and just dance - JH Laila Andresen Mjelde August 16, 2012 at 3:43 AM Thank you for coming back to read the poem mine, appreciate it .. Laila

Anne-Lise Andresen August 13, 2012 at 12:36 PM Well said Laila, just dance...- oxox love mom :) Laila Andresen Mjelde August 16, 2012 at 3:47 AM I dance all day ... lol .... - xoxo love Laila

Nette Onclaud August 13, 2012 at 12:32 PM whoo, an upbeat kind of winsome piece, laila... just wanna make me dance!... you sway!.. have a lovely time!.. i think this falls under 'verse?'... huggs!;) Laila Andresen Mjelde August 16, 2012 at 3:50 AM thanks for the nice words and for taking the time to read my poem Nette ... and thanks for your help ... I've changed it to verse.. I'm not good at knowing what genre my poems are written in... :( xoxo Laila