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I Feel the Seasons Through You

mountain peaks seek to forever commune with the very essence of lofty skies held inside my innocence here on earth as a winter blanket lays white against me so too your jagged ridges and valleys I feel the white envelope surround about my tender written poem when comes the spring, the frosty bite is melt and gathers your riches softly deposit them onto the banks of new flowers that adorn your light coat rebirth is sent to unfurl its iridescent wings bring the growth to bear the fruit sparkle against my eyes in emerald hues the summer months warm our core open your pathways for exploration on high see the shepherd and goat together along with eagle soaring, we all mountaineers as we step into your vast intensity I feel your cool breath clear the fog from me see quietude descend tumultuous mind while the sun ripens your forests to Autumn glorious cascades of bronze, I swoon my footsteps echo the inevitable slide down to retreat to safe hearth of warmth dens of fortitude held fast I look upon your newly capped snow face and succumb to winters arrival

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Date: 7/7/2020 11:47:00 PM
So elegant and captivating, Jeanne. Beautiful phrases and images. Congratulations!
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/8/2020 12:24:00 AM
Nature is captivating and calming. Thanks you :D
Date: 7/6/2020 10:58:00 PM
"...rebirth is sent to unfurl its iridescent wings...", it is captivating, Jeanne, brilliant expressions that entertains the mind, and my compliments truly, for your enriching endeavors, achieving an honorable placement, Kudos! -- Aloha~@William
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/8/2020 12:24:00 AM
I'm glad you enjoyed and stopped by to comment. Aloha too William.
Date: 7/6/2020 12:13:00 PM
Congrats on your placement in Brian's contest with your journey through the viccisitudes of the seasons, Jeanne! Cheers, Gershon
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/8/2020 12:23:00 AM
Thanks so much Gershon :D
Date: 7/5/2020 10:37:00 AM
We are definitely shaped by the seasons...A lovely write here
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/8/2020 12:23:00 AM
Autumn is probably my favorite for the beauty of the colors but I love the warmth of summer, the greens of spring and even the winter white that makes everything so pristine and new.
Date: 7/4/2020 10:43:00 PM
Never have all four seasons been penned so joyfully, colorfully and delicately Jeanne.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/8/2020 12:22:00 AM
ah, thanks Caren. I love hiking the mountains for the views.
Date: 7/4/2020 9:35:00 PM
Well expressed! Thanks for sharing with us.
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Jeanne Mcgee
Date: 7/8/2020 12:21:00 AM
Thank you for visiting and readying. very much appreciated.

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