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We're just friends, but I think of him a lot. I feel like crumbling up when my thoughts evolve with feelings of desire, I have fought. I write in my journal how I felt in my heart As the day started and the trouble it would arise. Everyone was watching, but all I see was him. He takes my breath away and everything becomes veiled. If, he could only gently touch or take his hand in mind. Stare into my eyes, his fingers entwined Around my hair, then pull me into his arms, kiss me and bring out the fiery storms within with his charm blossoming warmth’s. 2/12/2023,

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Date: 2/22/2023 6:56:00 AM
- Touching and beautiful, Eve - Congratulations on your win in the contest - hugs
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Date: 2/21/2023 1:44:00 PM
Congratulations on your win. What a romantic write. I enjoyed it. Have a blessed day writing away........................
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Date: 2/21/2023 4:32:00 AM
So beautifully expressed, Eve. I know how much you miss him. (So sorry) Great writing, my dear friend. Congratulations on your win! Hugs Charlie
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Date: 2/20/2023 8:39:00 PM
"all I see was him" - Deep love very beautifully expressed. Congratulations!
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Date: 2/12/2023 4:55:00 AM
You crafted a great poem, Eve. Your feelings are spilling over with vitality, and the imagery you use is of the highest caliber.
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Date: 2/12/2023 1:19:00 AM
Lovely poem. Your emotions excel. Hugs.
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