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House On Memory Lane

Feeling nostalgic, I went back home To a house on Memory Lane A sentimental trip, through the years that have flown To a three bedroom, small white, wood frame Where memories were built on a GI loan And little boys were forged into young men Where the little boy in me, is still running free Through cotton fields up to his chin The old house was still standing in some disrepair The gravel roads had all been paved 'neath the cottonwood tree, my daydreams were still there With the initials my puppy love engraved There was no father or mother, no sister or brother No neighbors I used to call friend No games to be played, no gold to discover Only memories of way back when But the love we shared, I saw everywhere In the garden, in the flowers and the trees And the life lessons I learned from the spills and the dares Gave me warmth in the cool winter breeze` Then sitting in the swing where I first learned to fly I heard the whistle of the afternoon train So I packed up my thoughts, said my final goodbye To the house on Memory Lane. by Daniel Turner

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Date: 5/12/2023 6:52:00 AM
Yes…that is how it is. When I returned to one of my childhood homes, I felt like I was in the movie “Back to the Future.” One road was so torn up and the pond was fenced in (I had to ask about it because it wasn’t my imagination). It all messes with your mind. Still our hearts contain a mix of the past, present and future and a desire for a perfect final home in heaven one day. God bless!
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Date: 5/12/2023 2:33:00 PM
Thank you, Kim:)
Date: 3/4/2023 12:06:00 PM
Wow! This touched me so much. It made me want to explore my childhood neighborhood in person instead of on Google Maps. I have driven by but never stopped. What a wonderful poem--thank you, Daniel! Ellen Gwaltney Bales
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Date: 3/4/2023 1:05:00 PM
Thank you, Ellen. It can be a rough trip, depending on your memories. Nothing is the same. Have a wonderful weekend.
Date: 6/8/2021 11:27:00 AM
Great memories that we cherish Daniel... They often pop up... Well penned... now am recollecting so many memories of my childhood... God bless... ~ Ani
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Date: 9/17/2020 1:47:00 AM
A very poignant piece Daniel. I drove past my old house recently and a wave of sadness came over me thinking about the happy times I spent there. What was once a home is now a house that belongs to someone else. Cheers - Gary
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Date: 9/17/2020 7:39:00 AM
Yes Gary. It was a sad occasion for me too. I really miss my parents and my siblings. perhaps it won't be too much longer and we shall all be together again. Lord willin' Take care my friend.
Date: 3/8/2020 9:38:00 AM
I can’t tell you how often I try going back. I can vividly see this house, on memory lane.
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Date: 3/8/2020 11:50:00 AM
Who knew, when we were young, that one day we would realize just how good we really had it. Back then our biggest problem was finding enough to do to keep us occupied all day. Thank you for the friendly visit, Anna. So nice to see you again:)
Date: 3/5/2020 1:21:00 AM
Lovely piece, full of nostalgia and reminiscence of good times.. a when we were young, piece in excellence.. # I salute you Daniel...
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Date: 2/4/2020 10:58:00 PM
Excellent Daniel. Off n on I also visit my old house where I spent my childhood to recollect sweet memories. Those days are gone forever.
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Date: 1/22/2020 12:41:00 PM
Wonderful!
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Date: 1/4/2020 3:57:00 AM
Read this amazing piece a lot of times. The content and the rhyme flows beautifully...!
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Date: 10/27/2019 11:30:00 AM
To only live it again, wouldn't change a thing
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Date: 10/22/2019 7:15:00 AM
WoW Daniel! This one is going into my faves. What wonderful description. I felt like I was there. Super emotion. Great Stuff. God Bless, JB
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Date: 10/1/2019 8:21:00 AM
I really enjoyed this poem DT. ! Very nice. I hope you are doing well :) Nice to see your poems again!
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Date: 9/20/2019 2:26:00 PM
This poem is great, but I’ve seen it when you posted it. I came to your page for more
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Date: 8/18/2019 11:23:00 AM
Daniel, I was sent to your blog because of the nonsense going on at the other poetry site. But I'm glad I stayed to read some of your poems. I love to take a trip down memory lane myself. -Richard
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Date: 8/13/2019 2:59:00 AM
Happy Birthday Danny! We miss you. I hope you're well? Aloha, Connie xxoo
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Date: 7/27/2019 2:24:00 PM
The views on this poem tell their own story- a trip down memory lane - something we all do from time to time. Loved this poem Daniel. Hugs, Jennifer.
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Date: 7/9/2019 5:48:00 PM
remembrances deeply stored in the heart, daniel... beautifully done!...huggs
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Date: 7/2/2019 8:57:00 PM
You had some nice memories, Daniel, never could remember mine. Enjoyed reading. Hugs dear friend
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Date: 6/10/2019 9:30:00 AM
What a nice memory. Kind wishes, Kai
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Date: 6/8/2019 7:52:00 PM
Beautifully reminiscent of days before. I look forward to reading more of your poems. Terri
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Date: 6/1/2019 1:01:00 AM
I came back to Fave this wonderful nostalgic poem Danny. Love it! xxoo
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Date: 5/25/2019 8:00:00 AM
Enjoyed this write...All the best Daniel
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Date: 5/22/2019 1:00:00 PM
This is a real gem of a poem, Daniel! Keep writing as it gives us something to look forward to reading! This brightened my day! :)
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Date: 5/10/2019 1:32:00 PM
This is an example of beautifully expressed nostalgia. I see it was posted some months ago, I do hope you have not stopped writing. // Barry
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Date: 4/1/2019 8:04:00 PM
Danny, this is the first poem I've added to my favorites in quite a while. I love this fine poem, which reminds me of my own trips down "memory lane"! Janice
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