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Contest: Haunted House/Cemetary/Woods

Sponsor: Tania Kitchin

17 October 2024

 

[Waxing gibbous = More than a half moon but not yet full]

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A crisp brown leaf from the sycamore tree Silently fell to the ground It gently lay down amidst more of its kind Having landed with no hint of sound How could it know of the silence required To survive through the night in these woods I’d crunched one such leaf underfoot in my haste And fell prey to the people in hoods The moon though dim, waxing gibbous, I think Throws monochrome shades in the night Against this old oak I am helpless and tied There’s no escape, try as I might What did they mean, “That’s her gluttony sated”? No woman I see hereabout My knees feel weak as shrivelled leaves crunch And they fail as that dull moon…… goes out

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Date: 11/1/2024 7:16:00 AM
Excellent, Terry. CONGRATS on your well-deserved first-place win. Janice
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Date: 11/1/2024 4:03:00 PM
Much appreciated, Janice. Thanks
Date: 10/31/2024 5:38:00 AM
Don’t dare go down in the haunted woods on Halloween, chances are that you’ll never again be seen. Enjoyed the read, congratulations on your win in Tania’s contest… Beryl
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Date: 10/31/2024 11:57:00 AM
Thanks, Beryl. I used to fish through the night in a pond in some woods… I’m no scaredy-cat but it could sure be spooky.
Date: 10/31/2024 2:58:00 AM
A chilling tale that had me gasping 'More, more ...' Congratulations on your win, Terry :)
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Date: 10/31/2024 11:54:00 AM
Thanks, Suzette. Perhaps I should play the ‘less is more’ game more often ;-‘
Date: 10/27/2024 8:48:00 PM
please write a sequel to this, else it keeps telling me silently 'then what happened' .. congratulations on your win dear poet. cheers.
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Date: 10/28/2024 7:06:00 AM
Thank you, Thriveni. I rarely write open ended tales, but the rules stipulated 16 lines so I left lines 17 onwards to the imagination. Mind you, maybe when I’m out of ideas, I’ll take another look at it.
Date: 10/27/2024 11:47:00 AM
Terry, a blood chilling mystery! Congratulations on your win! Blessings.
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Date: 10/28/2024 7:07:00 AM
Thanks, Sam. I wasn’t fully convinced of its spookiness, so I’m chuffed with a win ;-)
Date: 10/27/2024 11:23:00 AM
Indeed a haunting line! Congrats on your win!
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Date: 10/28/2024 7:08:00 AM
Thanks, Kim. Glad you enjoyed
Date: 10/27/2024 8:39:00 AM
Great job, Terry. Congrats on your win. Spooky!
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Date: 10/28/2024 7:08:00 AM
Glad you found the spooky in this, Jim. Terry
Date: 10/27/2024 7:13:00 AM
Terry, a great spooky poem, congratulations on your first place win.
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Date: 10/28/2024 7:10:00 AM
Thank you, Tania. Appreciate a shared first with a poem I wasn’t overly sure of.
Date: 10/17/2024 1:10:00 PM
you have painted a very spooky picture, terry, but, naturally, in perfect rhythm and rhyme! i like the unexplained ending - it adds to the spookiness...
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Date: 10/17/2024 3:01:00 PM
Thanks, Ilene. I guess with no distant bell chiming, no gates creaking, no wind moaning and only the mention of one dry leaf crunching underfoot, this is rather understated… took a chance on it because it felt ‘different’. Glad you enjoyed. Terry
Date: 10/17/2024 4:24:00 AM
Terry, your lines are mysteriously gruesome. You not only killed off a woman (I think) but the moon, too! An original take on scary. Nice concept.
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Date: 10/17/2024 11:43:00 AM
As mentioned to Deb, below, there’s much withheld here. The women referred to as ‘her’ was not necessarily a women but whatever might need a hunger sating. Did the moon go out or did someone/something come between me and it; did the clouds merely close in front of it or did I simply close my eyes in fear. Unless I consider padding it out as a separate poem… I guess we shall never know. Glad you ‘enjoyed’. Terry
Date: 10/17/2024 1:43:00 AM
Love this Terry….haunting , scary and beautifully written! Debx
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Date: 10/17/2024 11:31:00 AM
Really wasn’t quite sure about this, Deb, but it’s all I had to offer. There are so many verses I may have interwoven had the rules not stipulated 16 lines. So I’m chuffed that you enjoyed and that you managed to fill in the blanks. Terry

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